Like Brokeback Mountain... Only Gayer

[smilesawakeyou]

Title: Like Brokeback Mountain… Only Gayer (Sleep Madness series: 4/?)
Author: Yours truly
Fandom: The Daily Show.
Pairing: Jon/Stephen
Rating: PG-13 for showering goodness
Warning: This is still either AU or... the future!
A/N: Ok, so this isn’t FTANH, my new project with _lady_vanilla_ or crack. This is that old series that I apparently only write when I’m

Comments

[toperfection]

*Hug?* I do really hope you feel better and that the crapiness of the situation doesn't overwhelm you.
This, from the beginning, I have loved and this chapter wasn't exception. There's like an air of melancholy, even when they are talking and making each other smile but this feeling persist. I wanna hug all of you until everybody feels happy.
Oh, the smocking notes? Dead on. When I don't have any cigarettes I become twitch-o Woman, even though I'm twitchy all the time. But your hands feel like they have extra life and are another entity that isn't your body. I'm always cracking my finger, even though the sound and feeling make me shiver and grind my teeth, but I have to do something with the hands.
Anyway..this was amazing.

*offers cookies and love*

[smilesawakeyou]

Well, life's crappiness seems to be increasing but I'm at least getting a better outlook on it right now. In spite of the pooh. Rar.

There's like an air of melancholy, even when they are talking and making each other smile but this feeling persist.
THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT I WAS GOING FOR! Oh, hooray. I love it when my vision feels actualized. And thanks for the hug offers :-) It's very appreciated.

A couple of my friends smoke and, since I have twitchiness problems myself, I can relate. I'm always moving/biting my nails/chewing my fingers/playing with my rings/cracking my knuckles so it's an easy tic for me to write.

*takes cookies and love and offers to share them*

THANKS FOR READING!!!

[_lady_vanilla_]

Well, that doesn't bode well

That made me crease up with laughter.

I hope things are alright with you {{hugs}} Tell you what, read some more facts about the Holocaust. That'll uh... Yeah. But I really do hope you're okay, and making your characters just as depressed as you is a great outlet in my mind. =)

[smilesawakeyou]

I like abusing characters when I'm in a bad mood. I don't know exactly what that says about me. I think I actually will go and do research because it makes me feel productive/gives me ideas.

THANKS FOR READING!!!

[smilesawakeyou]

Haha. "Shappy." I like.

*takes cookies and skips around with them* Cooookiiiiies.

Thanks for reading and leaving such a nice comment :-) I'm sure the clouds will lift soon.

Your icon is too hot, btw.

[violent_rabbit]

I am intrigued! Poor Jon and all his heartbreak and now a crush.

[smilesawakeyou]

Things will only get better for our little Jonathan... once he removes his head from his butt, of course.

THANKS FOR READING!!!!

[otnat]

I love this story sooo much.
And I absolutely love your writing style! Its a style I've tried to adopt, but can never quite manage. And not just the way you write Jon and Stephen, but he way you write everything. I read your recap of going to TDS taping and I was laughing my ass off just at the way that you wrote things:

"not white or Jewish but mexican dude" hahahaha!

The whole time I kept saying out loud to myself "I love the way she writes!"

Cant wait to read the next part to this story <3

[smilesawakeyou]

Ok, so I usually reply to comments in order but I left your's for last because OMG. That is seriously the nicest comment anyone has ever left me and... yeah. You've made me all schmoopy!

I tend to get paranoid about my writing style (I'm really self-deprecating to the nth degree) so hearing that someone likes it that much... it really means a lot to me. I have a hard time accepting compliments but I'm going to try my darndest to take yours to heart.

In summary: I love you and your kind words. THANKS SO MUCH FOR READING AND YOU'RE OFFICIALLY MY FAVORITE PERSON EVARRRRRR!