Comments | smiles_a_lot: The Dance - Interlude: Water, Earth and Sky

smiles_a_lot

The Dance - Interlude: Water, Earth and Sky

Aug 10, 2007 00:51

Rating: R, smex alert!
Disclaimer: Ennis and Jack were created by Annie Proulx. All laud and honour go to her.
Summary: This is an interlude that takes place on one of J & E's camping trips, a few years before The Package and The Dance. Hey! I miss Jack, too!

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smiles_a_lot, the package, the dance

Comments 49

**sigh** edgarsbabe August 10 2007, 05:52:36 UTC

"Cause all I see is you"...bliss indeed!

Re: **sigh** smiles_a_lot August 13 2007, 19:30:05 UTC

Thanks so much. Sigh. I love -- er -- LIKE comments like that. - Em

water earth and sky bijou16 August 10 2007, 06:01:14 UTC

hi smiles,
that was a wonderful interlude. i loved it!!!!
teresa

Re: water earth and sky smiles_a_lot August 13 2007, 19:31:01 UTC

Hey Teresa - Thank you. I loved writing it! Inspired by the wonderful Canadian summer we've been having. - Em

tizi17 August 10 2007, 06:28:13 UTC

i really hoped i had gotten you right with your hint....
AND I WAS...!!!!!
ohhh this is sooo wonderful.. thank you so much! makes my leaving easier...
.."all i see is you.."......mmmmmmmmmmmmmhhh!

smiles_a_lot August 13 2007, 19:31:40 UTC

Hey honey - So glad this made it just in time for your vacation. See you when you get back. Enjoy your gorgeous ones. xx Em

dwarfishdiva August 10 2007, 06:34:39 UTC

Thank you, that was wonderful :)

smiles_a_lot August 13 2007, 19:32:41 UTC

Thank you for your comment. What more can we ask for? Two beautiful men on a beautiful summer day. Drat! Forgot to write in the ice cream!! - Em

big_heart_june August 10 2007, 06:37:27 UTC

“I…uhh…I…love…uh…l-like when you talk about that stuff,” Jack whispered, haltingly.

Ennis had to swallow the lump lodged in his throat. He felt his edges begin to unfurl, opening slowly to the warmth in Jack’s eyes.

“I…uh…like the look you give me when I talk about that stuff,” Ennis whispered back. “

I loved these sweet lines. :) And I loved the shout out to Missy! The smex was, of course, gorgeous! I loved it when Ennis licked Jack's vein... And 'soft buttery leather' that's just beautiful. :) You always come up with the most lovely stuff. This whole interlude was beautiful, Em. Thanks so much XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

smiles_a_lot August 13 2007, 19:35:22 UTC

Oh yes, the vein lick. I think Ennis really likes the little things, I mean, uhmm, he likes the BIG things too, but...well...the intimate little details is what stick out...I mean...come to mind...ummm. Well you know what I mean. Ahh yes, soft buttery leather. I really do think Jack smells that way. *Shivers* xx Em