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Like Passing Notes in Secrecy 9/13

Jan 22, 2011 22:31

Title: Like Passing Notes in Secrecy
Chapter: 9/13
Rating: R
Character: Puck/Rachel
Summary: He's never really missed a girl before. He never cared enough, really, to miss anyone.
Word Count: 6,500
Disclaimer: Don't own.

( Rachel not being in Lima sucks and he hates it. )

fanfic: puck/rachel, character: rachel berry, character: puck, like passing notes in secrecy

Comments 28

marydphresh January 23 2011, 08:26:59 UTC

So amazing. Marriage and a baby next. Or them moving in together. God! I love this story :)

smc_27 January 24 2011, 14:39:52 UTC

You'll just have to wait and see what comes next. ;)

Thanks for the comment!

pristhebest January 23 2011, 17:59:35 UTC

The whole 'iloveyou' scene made me giggle. I love how silly they are together, and how Hannah basically took over Aviva's role of pestering Noah to make a honest woman out of Rachel - even though she doesn't say the words, the intent is there.
Also - it's awesome how protective Rachel is of Noah and Hannah. She looks out for them the best way she can, even offering to talk to his dad (and how he wanted to keep her from doing it, it made me smile, for unknown reasons).
It's sad that this is coming down to the end (four chapters to go and counting), but I can't wait to see how they're going to fix their distance issue!

smc_27 January 24 2011, 14:40:47 UTC

Thanks, bb! They're definitely silly, but he totally needs that in his life, especially right now. Rachel loves them both, so she's definitely going to be protective, and you know Puck loves her for that!

x_katylou_x January 23 2011, 20:04:03 UTC

They need to get married and have a baby. I've decided it needs to happen because they're eo effing cute. I love them.

I don't watch the Vampire Diaries but I nearly spat my drink out at the Bonnie reference. I take it not many people like her? LOL

Puck's ILY was pefect! Rachel's reaction was even better! LOL

I hate that Rachel is staying in NY. Can they work on the distance between them? If they do I could seriously consider marrying this fic.

I LOVE IT!

Katy x

smc_27 January 24 2011, 14:41:32 UTC

Thanks for the awesome comment, bb! So glad you're still into this.

Trust me on the Bonnie reference. Just...trust me.

nicalyse January 23 2011, 20:15:21 UTC

Somehow, it makes perfect sense for Puck to behave like a child when Hannah gets in trouble at school.

Charmed really is the best way to describe how I feel about this story.

smc_27 January 24 2011, 14:42:31 UTC

Puck is basically a 14-year-old boy in a 22-year-old's body at this point, so yeah, he's probably going to high five her instead of punishing her.

Thank you so much!

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smc_27 January 24 2011, 14:42:44 UTC

Thank you so much! :)