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smc_27

All I Did Was Help You Tell A Lie

Jul 29, 2010 16:08

Title: All I Did Was Help You Tell A Lie
Chapter: 1/1
Warning: PG. Fictable prompt #35 - Candle
Character: Rachel, Rachel/Puck
Summary: He came in through her window often enough. Once every few weeks. Always late at night, always alone, sometimes drunk.
Word Count: 10,150
Disclaimer: Don't own.

( She'd always gotten by just fine without any friends at all. )

fanfic: puck/rachel, fanfic: rachel, fictable

Comments 35

blair4eva July 30 2010, 13:08:34 UTC

As always fantastic..so much angat! I am such a sucker for it

smc_27 July 31 2010, 04:04:11 UTC

Thank you so much! I love the angst, too.

veronica_28 July 30 2010, 13:49:39 UTC

I don't know how you can write so many stories, about the same two people, and make each one so uniquely special. You've never written a word I did not love - don't always comment, but this was just a make you catch your breath kind of beautiful. I'm continually amazed by the scope of your talent. Thank you for sharing it.

smc_27 July 31 2010, 04:04:51 UTC

Aww, thank you so much. I really appreciate that. I'm really glad you liked this, and my other writing. :)

reallygoodliars July 30 2010, 18:41:44 UTC

I am a turrible, turrible LJ friend. SO, I know you're prob like who da f*** is dis???? Lol.

I just thought that I should remind you how spectacular your writing is. I love your P/R fics, but this one carried a lot of weight for me. It was so angsty and sad but hopeful altogether. I dunno how you do it. I think it was even more heart wrenching being that it seemed to be entirely from Rachel's POV and not Puck's. Cuz you do Puck damn well.

You DO Puck damn well. He told me so. ;)

smc_27 July 31 2010, 04:07:23 UTC

Nawwww, I know who you are. :P

Thank you so much. I really liked writing this one, too. I don't really know why, exactly, but I have this love of PR being totally effed up and angsty. I definitely wanted it to have a hopeful ending. And yes, it was all Rachel's POV, which I don't do so often, but really love writing.

Listen, I would do Puck damn well. Shit. I didn't say that. I'm 26 and he's supposed to be 16. And fictional. Whatever! :P

reallygoodliars August 2 2010, 14:49:07 UTC

PR go well together effed up and angsty, I agrees. They have much more depth that way vs. their random hookcup circa Mash-Up.

And um, let's just pretend that he failed (twice) and he's actually a strapping 18-yr-old man.

Even tho in real life he's like your age. Which IDK if that's better. Because an experienced Puck is hella dangerous.

lunamystik July 30 2010, 21:56:11 UTC

This was wonderful! I could really see this happening in season 2, and you kept Puck very true to form. Loved it!

smc_27 July 31 2010, 04:07:51 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it, bb.

Say It Aint So! 7gifts July 30 2010, 22:04:23 UTC

oh gosh you couldn't possibly end it there, please say there might be a sequel!

Forgive the rant, that was my own way of saying I enjoyed reading the roller coaster that was Puck/Rachel's friendship in this fic and I'm glad Rachel stood up for herself in the end. I would have loved if the fic explored what happened after the last paragraph e.g. Was he man enough to be her friend both secretly and in school? What became of their relationship afterwards.

All and all, thank you for writing an interesting story.

Re: Say It Aint So! smc_27 July 31 2010, 04:08:43 UTC

Hmm. No plans for a sequel. I liked this ending! It was all hopeful after the angst. But I'm really, really glad you liked it. I'll let you use your imagination for what happens after the last words. ;)