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All I Did Was Help You Tell A Lie

Jul 29, 2010 16:08

Title: All I Did Was Help You Tell A Lie
Chapter: 1/1
Warning: PG. Fictable prompt #35 - Candle
Character: Rachel, Rachel/Puck
Summary: He came in through her window often enough. Once every few weeks. Always late at night, always alone, sometimes drunk.
Word Count: 10,150
Disclaimer: Don't own.

( She'd always gotten by just fine without any friends at all. )

fanfic: puck/rachel, fanfic: rachel, fictable

Comments 35

podgybelle July 29 2010, 23:54:24 UTC

"How many times do I have to ask you to leave before you realize you want to stay?"

amazing

smc_27 July 31 2010, 03:58:17 UTC

Thank you so much for commenting.

thecowsays_moo July 30 2010, 03:19:29 UTC

Wow. I checked your lj in the tiny sliver of hope that we might get 2 chapters of
Bodyguard!Puck in one day, totally was not expecting this.

Amazing job as always. Literally every new piece I want to say "this is my new favorite
fanfic!!" and every time, I really do mean it. Gahhhh. And this is after reading Dominated
Hand for the first time over the past couple days - I had saved it for a time when I really
needed some Puckleberry excitement. So basically 3 totally different amazing ffs in a few
days = AMAZING OVERLOAD.
I love that this piece is full of emotional tension rather than lust, it's so heartbreaking
and beautiful.

And THANK YOU for this: ("The fuck is that thing, Berry? A sex cape? You some kind of super hero? Not hot.")
Perfect line.

(Is it weird to say that this reminded me a teeny bit of Dawson's Creek? On a totally
superficial level - window climbing - but still)

smc_27 July 31 2010, 03:59:41 UTC

Aww, thank you so much. That's so sweet. I'm really glad you liked this.

And really, that cape thing...No. Puck would have been all, "This thing gotsta go."

I can see how it would remind you of DC! :P

gidget_zb July 30 2010, 04:09:00 UTC

Oh Puck is so fucked up and I love it when you just let him be all fucked up, you know? Like this is so perfect and perfect and perfect and I even love that there's no real resolution. They still don't get each other, but they get each other.

Clearly I am speaking in riddle tonight lol. Great job!

smc_27 July 31 2010, 04:01:46 UTC

Puck definitely is fucked up, and yeah, people try to 'fix him'. It's fun to do that sometimes, but you know what? Real life ain't that easy. He'd make mistakes and hurt her without really meaning to. I didn't want to have some big, Hollywood ending to this. It wouldn't have fit. The fact that they just kind of came back to one another again was resolution enough for them, you know?

Look, I'm speaking in riddles, too. :P

Thank you for commenting!

ellashy July 30 2010, 07:23:05 UTC

This was so freaking beautiful. They are so broken but they fit together in all the right places... Geez i dont think im making sense lol

smc_27 July 31 2010, 04:02:05 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it.

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smc_27 July 31 2010, 04:03:38 UTC

Aww, thanks. I think you and I are probably the fandom's two biggest angst lovers! So glad you liked this one. I have a weird connection to it that I can't really explain. As much as I love them, I kind of love the idea of them not quite getting it right. It makes no sense at all, I know.

Thanks for the comment, bb!