Dominated Hand [8/10]

Jun 04, 2010 17:13

Title: Dominated Hand
Chapter: 8/10
Warning: NC-17
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Summary: He doesn't expect Rachel to be good at poker, and there's no way he's going to let her beat him. Turns out that when the stakes are high, Puck comes to play. "Whoever loses has to be the other's slave." 
Word Count: 7,643
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fanfic: puck/rachel, dominated hand

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mvp June 5 2010, 00:45:49 UTC
OMg that was hot!
I love this story so much i really do. I specially love the Rachel/Santana friendship i want more of that!! Are there any other stories out there that have those 2 become friends?

I cant wait until the next chapter!!

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smc_27 June 5 2010, 19:09:48 UTC
Hee! The hotness has just begun! :P

I haven't seen many (good) stories where Rachel and Santana are friends, but it might become a bit of a theme in my writing now. I'm sure I'll include it again.

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snoozin81 June 5 2010, 01:08:03 UTC
*EPIC FLAIL*

No really, epic! This was so hot and amazing and fantastic and did I mention HOT? I love how prefectly in character Puck and Rahcel are and you really, really, really have me wanting a Santana/Puck/Rachel threeway because I absolutely adore the Santana/Rachel freindship almost as much as I LOVE the Puckleberry.

certified awesome Puckasaurus Sex

BEST. LINE. EVER.

Every chapter I find I love this fic even more. Can't wait until the next one<3

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smc_27 June 5 2010, 19:11:17 UTC
Thanks!! I really hope you like the next chapter. There is a Santana/Puck phone call that I think is pretty hilarious, if I may say so.

Puckasaurus Sex! You are the only one who has mentioned that and I love you for it. :P

Thanks so much for commenting!

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cookiesmonsters June 5 2010, 01:10:04 UTC
O_O. O_O

That's kind of all I have to say right now. Aside from I hate when your fics have determined endings =[

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smc_27 June 5 2010, 19:26:23 UTC
Hee! Glad you liked it, bb!

Don't be sad! It's pretty much guaranteed it won't be long before I post something else. :)

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xthebackseatx June 5 2010, 01:14:56 UTC
Omfg!!!!!! That was insanely hot! Puckasaurus! Yeah, so this is my new favorite fic of all time. I'm going to be so sad when it's over! I just want it to go on forever!

I'm loving posessive Puck, and Rachel giving in and indulging her inner bad girl! Part of me wants the next day to be all painfully awkward and with the delicious UST, and the other part of me just wants them to have at it already!

In other words, wow. This was completely amazing.

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smc_27 June 5 2010, 19:27:39 UTC
Aww, thanks! I'm glad you like it so much! It can't go on forever, though. ;)

There will be a smidge of awkwardness, but it won't last long. They're pretty comfortable with one another at this point!

Thank you so much for the comment!

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breathemusique June 5 2010, 01:24:04 UTC
*flails* OMFG. so hot. cant think. so amazing.

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smc_27 June 5 2010, 19:28:14 UTC
Hee! Hot was what I was going for! :P Thanks for commenting.

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