Dominated Hand [8/10]

Jun 04, 2010 17:13

Title: Dominated Hand
Chapter: 8/10
Warning: NC-17
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Summary: He doesn't expect Rachel to be good at poker, and there's no way he's going to let her beat him. Turns out that when the stakes are high, Puck comes to play. "Whoever loses has to be the other's slave." 
Word Count: 7,643
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fanfic: puck/rachel, dominated hand

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impish_dragon June 5 2010, 01:40:09 UTC
That was good. and hot. Though I'm probably in the minority, I'm glad she didn't stay. I don't want them to be together while the bet is still in play. Even though I (and they) know they want each other, it should still be without any thing else hanging over them making them question. More soon.

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smc_27 June 5 2010, 19:29:33 UTC
Thanks! I agree with you, and feelings will be addressed before they 'go there'. This isn't just some one night stand, and they both need to know that.

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aubrey_grace June 5 2010, 01:48:50 UTC
Oh dear god that was fucking hot!

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smc_27 June 5 2010, 19:29:59 UTC
Hee! Thanks! I hope you liked it!

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countrygirl_914 June 5 2010, 03:12:50 UTC
God, almost-but-not-quite phone sex should not be that hot. When they actually do the deed I think they're going to explode.

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smc_27 June 5 2010, 19:31:01 UTC
Chapter 10 is pretty much exclusively sex. So yeah. All this tension hasn't been for nothing. ;)

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countrygirl_914 June 6 2010, 03:30:09 UTC
*rubs hands together in anticipation* :)

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halfabubble June 5 2010, 03:37:44 UTC
Oh lawd this was hot.

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smc_27 June 5 2010, 19:31:27 UTC
:) Hope you liked it! Thanks for commenting.

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motylik June 5 2010, 08:37:44 UTC
I kind of like that Rachel didn't give in right away. :) But they are on the way, which is awesome. :D Can't wait to read more, this whole chapter was very hot!

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smc_27 June 5 2010, 19:32:27 UTC
Thanks for commenting! Surprisingly a lot of people are glad she didn't stay. That puts my mind at ease. I know it might be torture waiting for them to get together, but it'll be worth it! :P

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