Dominated Hand [4/?]

[smc_27]

Title: Dominated Hand
Chapter: 4/?
Warning: NC-17
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Summary: He doesn't expect Rachel to be good at poker, and there's no way he's going to let her beat him. Turns out that when the stakes are high, Puck comes to play. "Whoever loses has to be the other's slave." 
Word Count: 4,559
Disclaimer: Don't own.

Comments

[iheartpuck]

eep! spooning with Puck aww. Loved this so much, in a strange way I find it sweet that Puck is not going to see Rachel's underwear until she wants him to, which is inevitable. Just awesome can't wait to see how this plays out.

[smc_27]

Who wouldn't spoon with Puck? Really. I went back and forth on Puck snooping through her underwear drawer. Because yeah, he probably would just go for it, but at the same time, he wants to see her wearing her underwear. So yeah. That was a battle I had.

Thanks for the comment!

[totally_loca]

this makes me so happy. :D

[smc_27]

I'm glad! :) Thanks for commenting!

[andbless_mybaby]

I hope that this isn't the first comment I'm leaving on this story, but OMG, LOVE IT. Updates to this are drop-everything-and-read-NOW events in my life at the moment. That spooning scene was almost too ridiculously cute for words. I feel like I'm going crazy waiting for that NC-17 rating to be justified. :p

So fantastic.

[smc_27]

Aww yay! Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I have to weave a little cuteness into the story sometimes, just to balance things out. And the idea of them spooning is pretty freaking adorable.

Don't worry. It's NC-17 for a reason. It's just taking a little time to get there!

[kimmy_77]

I was sunk at Puck in her bed, cause really who doesn't fantasize about that? ;)

The spooning! We need a whole fic dedicated to Puckleberry spooning now. And a whole fic dedicated to him picking out clothes for her. Naughty fics. They just sound innocent.

Sorry, mind in the gutter.

I get so excited when you update I squeal and clap my hands like a kid. And my dog gives me the stink eye cause she thinks I'm nuts. Totally worth it though cause this was a fantastic chapter! Great job!

[smc_27]

Puck and Rachel on her bed spooning together. This just needs to happen.

I know what you mean on the 'innocent' thing. Sometimes I start writing something sweet and fluffy and cute and then all of a sudden, their clothes are falling off and I'm like, "Oh, Puck. You can't do anything innocently."

Thanks so much for commenting!

[musical_jay]

I knew Puck was a cuddler! I knew it!

Can't wait to see the reaction of that dress. Wonderful :)

[smc_27]

Hehe! He totally is a cuddler. The dress will get some interesting reactions. ;)