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Dominated Hand [4/?]

May 24, 2010 12:58

Title: Dominated Hand
Chapter: 4/?
Warning: NC-17
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Summary: He doesn't expect Rachel to be good at poker, and there's no way he's going to let her beat him. Turns out that when the stakes are high, Puck comes to play. "Whoever loses has to be the other's slave."
Word Count: 4,559
Disclaimer: Don't own.

( God, he loves having a slave. )

fanfic: puck/rachel, dominated hand

Comments 35

mangobaby716 May 24 2010, 20:37:14 UTC

lovely as always. I adored the whole this isn't spooning and the fact that Puck is a secret cuddler.

smc_27 May 26 2010, 03:50:57 UTC

Puck is totally a cuddler. You know he is. He just needs the right girl to cuddle with ;) Thanks for commenting!

countrygirl_914 May 24 2010, 20:51:38 UTC

And Rachel wins in the end, lol. Love it!

smc_27 May 26 2010, 03:51:39 UTC

Hee! You know she's not just going to let him get away with whatever he wants. :P

ellashy May 24 2010, 20:52:11 UTC

I love that you made Puck a cuddler.. spooning scene is so cute.
Can't wait to see everyones reaction to Rachel's dress.

smc_27 May 26 2010, 03:52:26 UTC

I like the idea of Puck being a cuddler. C'mon. Put arms like that to good use! Thanks for commenting!

xnarchix May 24 2010, 21:14:49 UTC

YAY for a new Chapter. I was randomly checking your LJ for new posts (I'm kind of a stalker because I'm so obsessed with your fics.. I won't even apologize for it. Hahaha) and listening to the Spring Awakening Soundtrack when I saw this. I actually said "fuck yes" out loud (don't know where that came from, I don't ever curse. It's all Puck's influence, I swear).

This was such a lovely chapter. Everything from the fact that Puck is a secret cuddler to Rachel's 'This isn't spooning' comment and demonstration because of course she would say something like that.

I really can't wait for the next Chapter. (Meaning I'll check your LJ approximately every 15 minutes just to get disappointed lots of times but it'll all be worth it because there will be this one time when there will be a new Chapter, HA!)

smc_27 May 26 2010, 03:55:18 UTC

Hahah. Well, you can bet I'll update every two or three days. I try to update pretty quickly.

Rachel was totally clueless to him knowing exactly what spooning was. And what girl wouldn't demonstrate? "Oh, you mean I get to lay in your arms for a while? I suppose I could work with that." :P

Next chapter will probably be up tomorrow! :)

mvp May 24 2010, 21:15:16 UTC

I dont know if its because its the one im reading/you're writing now but i think this one might be my favorite!!!
Cant wait to read the next chapter

smc_27 May 26 2010, 03:55:44 UTC

Aww. Thanks! I'm glad you like it so much!!