Comments | slybrunette: the city sun sets over me {michael/sun}

slybrunette

the city sun sets over me {michael/sun}

Sep 04, 2009 11:11

Title: The City Sun Sets Over Me
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Sun/Michael.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,496
Author's Note: Go easy on me guys, Lost and me have a hard time understanding each other these days. Written for the promptathon. Relies on alternative timelines, or at least my idea of them. Also, I haven't been to Rockefeller Center in ( Read more... )

promptathon, fandom: lost, !fic, character: lost: michael, character: lost: sun, ship: lost: michael/sun

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slybrunette September 4 2009, 15:26:25 UTC

Hee, I had no idea it was yours. Go figure, lol.

I wanted to try and link together the different parts, even though they're not necessarily happening chronoligically, but I wasn't sure people would understand what I was saying, so I'm very glad that you did.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this!

crickets September 4 2009, 15:45:09 UTC

I don't know why you worry because this was just amazing. I love every word. All of these possible scenarios, especially the one in the elevator. I would have liked to see that scene for real.

slybrunette September 4 2009, 15:56:37 UTC

Aw thanks! I was just worried that people wouldn't get it, and that my characterization was off. And I'm glad that you liked the elevator one -- the whole fic was sprouted from a picture of the lights in the elevator there, and so that scene ended up as my kind of big deal central one because of it.

I'm so glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

bebitched September 4 2009, 17:04:14 UTC

Okay, now I know why this was giving you a headache. SO MANY TIMELINES.

But this is awesome in a very Lost-mindfuck kind of way. Great work!

slybrunette September 4 2009, 17:05:30 UTC

Well, I mean, it's 4 but...still. It hurt my brain. But I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks!

(P.S. - currently writing: Lily/Robin, prom ;))

bebitched September 4 2009, 17:07:30 UTC

SWEET. I AM SO PUMPED FOR THAT.

slybrunette September 4 2009, 17:09:19 UTC

I even rewatched the ep and everything lol, cause I'm weird like that.

aurilly September 4 2009, 17:48:30 UTC

Fantastic! I love how they're all separate, but what with the reset and everything, it could totally be strung together in a bizarro timeline.

THANK YOU. Michael/Sun is one of my favorites, and not only was this about them, but it was beautifully executed. It feels so fated and circular and great. Plus, as a born and bred New Yorker, I squeed to see Sun in NYC. YAY!

slybrunette September 4 2009, 17:50:50 UTC

Yeah, I kind of was aiming for it to be some kind of bizarro timeline actually lol.

I loved Michael/Sun in Season 1, and I still kind of harbor some love for them. I think it was an interesting dynamic that needed further exploration.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

valhalla37 September 4 2009, 19:39:26 UTC

This is GORGEOUS; seriously breath-taking. I adore the fragmented concept, and how vividly you draw all these possibilities. So fantastic!

slybrunette September 4 2009, 20:07:49 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad that worked for you, because I am the first to admit that I am way out of practice.