Comments | slybrunette: the city sun sets over me {michael/sun}

slybrunette

the city sun sets over me {michael/sun}

Sep 04, 2009 11:11

Title: The City Sun Sets Over Me
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Sun/Michael.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,496
Author's Note: Go easy on me guys, Lost and me have a hard time understanding each other these days. Written for the promptathon. Relies on alternative timelines, or at least my idea of them. Also, I haven't been to Rockefeller Center in ( Read more... )

promptathon, fandom: lost, !fic, character: lost: michael, character: lost: sun, ship: lost: michael/sun

Comments 27

siluria September 4 2009, 21:17:28 UTC

Chance meetings and destinies is one of the Lost tales that I really enjoy, and I love the way you bounce around the what-if's. I love the characterisation too and the detail in you imagery that lets the reader 'see' everything.

slybrunette September 5 2009, 13:53:19 UTC

Lost definitely is about those things, and I tried to stay true to that in the story.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

tellshannon815 September 4 2009, 22:16:58 UTC

Great characterisation here, love the what ifs!

slybrunette September 5 2009, 13:54:01 UTC

Thank you! This time around I felt like I was struggling a bit with the characterization. But I'm glad that you enjoyed this!

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slybrunette September 5 2009, 14:01:43 UTC

I am a huge fan of all things NYC (originally a New Yorker -- just not from the city) and so when I saw this prompt it was just begging for me to write it.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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slybrunette September 5 2009, 14:02:38 UTC

I definitely wanted to have him as a ghost -- or something; I wasn't exactly clear as to the nature of what he was there.

I'm glad this worked for you! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

zelda_zee September 5 2009, 08:27:20 UTC

Lovely! I particularly like the various timelines in this piece, though I confess I just gave up on figuring out the 'when' of them and just went with the flow.

(Wanna know a secret? You are one of the very few writers who will occasionally tempt me to read het, because I really enjoy your style of writing.)

slybrunette September 5 2009, 14:04:42 UTC

There's less of a when I think. It's more where it fits in the timeline of the show. They certainly aren't chronological, and probably incredibly confusing, so I appreciate anyone who actually taked the time to read this because...well even I was confused by the end of this.

And hearing you say that makes me smile. I'm so bad with writing Lost anymore, but every time I do you guys all make me feel like I wish I had more inspiration to.

I'm thrilled that you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!