just look at the state of you {owen/cristina}

Jun 09, 2009 16:51

Title: Just Look At The State Of You
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Characters/Pairings: Owen/Cristina
Rating: R
Word Count: 1,508
Author's Note: I'm really not sure how I feel about this, but I'm not letting 1,500+ words go to waste, so i'm posting it. For the prompt shower, over at the Porn Battle VIII.
Summary: Post Season 5 finale. There's something ( Read more... )

character: ga: cristina, challenge: porn battle viii, character: ga: owen, fandom: grey's anatomy, !fic, ship: ga: owen/cristina

Leave a comment

Comments 40

ladybeth June 9 2009, 23:12:29 UTC
ooo...I like. *huggles Cristina*

by the arms of her best friend’s arms

I don't think you need the double arms.

Reply

slybrunette June 10 2009, 01:09:10 UTC
You would think I would learn with my need for betas -- ugh. Thank you. Muchly. I fail.

And also thank you for reading and enjoying!

Reply

ladybeth June 10 2009, 03:25:08 UTC
Heh...I always forget betas till someone goes "Um...you should beta this" and I realise how bad it is.

Reply


nursebadass June 10 2009, 01:15:35 UTC
AWESOME.

<3 I love it. You're so good at writing Cristina.

Reply

slybrunette June 10 2009, 01:26:54 UTC
Aw thanks! She's always been a character that I feel like I struggle with, specifically in anything where I'm not writing her with Meredith (as friends, you know), but I consider you the expert so...lol.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reply

nursebadass June 10 2009, 01:31:47 UTC
LOL, expert. One day when my life isn't imploding (exploding?) I will write. :P

Reply

slybrunette June 10 2009, 01:32:41 UTC
Life will stop imploding soon. I promise (what I'm basing this promise on I have no idea lol).

Reply


shli1117 June 10 2009, 01:29:05 UTC
That was just gorgeous. Totally not what I was expecting. I was completely blown away. I love how the main focus is the grief and the comfort. I really love the fact that there's context and this isn't some random romp in the shower. It's got that emotional pull to it. Just absolutely wonderful. And for the record, I think you should feel freakin' proud for what you wrote. It was breathtaking. Seriously.

Reply

slybrunette June 10 2009, 01:33:57 UTC
I don't do random romps. I'm not a PWP writer. Frankly, PWP scares me, intimidates me. My heart lies in the emotion -- it's what I enjoy, dare i say what I'm better at, so you won't ever find that with me, let me tell you. But thank you for such kind words, I really appreciate them.

I'm glad you enjoyed this! Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Reply


crickets June 10 2009, 01:44:04 UTC
This is really beautiful and sad.

You've got these two down.

I need more GA icons, clearly.

Reply

slybrunette June 10 2009, 01:46:12 UTC
See, I always feel the exact opposite, like these are the two I know the least. And then people go and say things like that, so maybe it's just supposed to feel weird, idk.

Yes, you do need more GA icons. It's strange that I have a O/C one over at DW, but none here. Fail on my part as well.

Reply


xtaline June 10 2009, 01:46:09 UTC
Damn, that was all kinds of amazing. You totally nailed it (hee!). The sexiness, the sadness, the heartbreak...great job!

Reply

slybrunette June 10 2009, 01:46:43 UTC
Oh word puns, lol.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up