Comments | slybrunette: it's nothing but time and a face that you lose {daniel/charlotte}

slybrunette

it's nothing but time and a face that you lose {daniel/charlotte}

Feb 04, 2009 18:14

Title: It's Nothing But Time And A Face That You Lose
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Daniel/Charlotte -- sort of
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 945
Author's Note: I am so out of practice with Lost fic these days...
Summary: Spoilers for Season 5, spec after that. There are rules to this, and Daniel's about to break them.

( he can't relax )

challenge: lostfichallenge, ship: lost: daniel/charlotte, character: lost: charlotte, fandom: lost, !fic, character: lost: daniel

Comments 16

sursumcorda February 4 2009, 23:53:34 UTC

Oh, SADNESS. So pretty, though. I liked it.

slybrunette February 7 2009, 17:28:09 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

emiliglia February 5 2009, 00:29:33 UTC

Oooh, poor Dan! This made my heart ache. Well done!

slybrunette February 7 2009, 17:58:25 UTC

Aw, thanks! I'm glad you liked this!

karalea February 5 2009, 01:21:13 UTC

I love this.
And I'm sad now. D:

I love Charlotte and Daniel and them together and I'm going to be so sad when she dies and the show isn't even being subtle about it, they're like, "oh, hey, Charlotte's going to die in a few weeks, we're not even going to let you enjoy the time she has left without SADNESS every time you see her." I refuse to be optimistic, all that will do is crush me a little more when it happens. And DANIEL WILL BE SO SAD. ...I find this all very distressing and talk about it a lot.

But this was fantastic and I love the song you used for the title.

gigglemonster February 6 2009, 01:21:04 UTC

Aww Dan!
I love this dude, so sad but so wonderful
And I love that he got in the cab with her anyway, screw time travel rules! ;)
♥

saved29 February 6 2009, 05:12:51 UTC

Go ahead Dan, break all the rules you want.
That was exactly as I pictured Charlotte, wanting to hit the next imbecile who tried to hit on her. Ha Ha
My heart aches in sympathy for Daniel's
Lovely fic.

slybrunette February 20 2009, 21:48:23 UTC

(I'm so late here)

It's really nice to hear that you enjoyed this hun! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

heartoutofstone February 12 2009, 00:16:29 UTC

i read this a little while ago but didn't have time to comment. i just read it again and wow.
it's incredibly well written (especially You can’t alter history, aren’t supposed to interact with people you don’t yet know - who knows the damage you could do. It’s not like he doesn’t know this, can’t hide behind ignorance.) and terribly sad/heartbreaking at the same time.
amazing job, seriously. :)

slybrunette February 20 2009, 21:47:42 UTC

Aw thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!