Comments | slybrunette: it's nothing but time and a face that you lose {daniel/charlotte}

slybrunette

it's nothing but time and a face that you lose {daniel/charlotte}

Feb 04, 2009 18:14

Title: It's Nothing But Time And A Face That You Lose
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Daniel/Charlotte -- sort of
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 945
Author's Note: I am so out of practice with Lost fic these days...
Summary: Spoilers for Season 5, spec after that. There are rules to this, and Daniel's about to break them.

( he can't relax )

challenge: lostfichallenge, ship: lost: daniel/charlotte, character: lost: charlotte, fandom: lost, !fic, character: lost: daniel

Comments 16

missy_useless February 20 2009, 21:45:27 UTC

I loved this! It's sad and heartbreaking and perfect, and also so very well written. Your Dan and Charlotte voices are amazing. Oh, and ...

Time has become nothing more than a word, lost its meaning, with all the jumping around he’s been doing lately. The island, the past - he’s still waiting for the future, wonders if that’s even achievable -- he’s been all over and it leaves his head spinning.

This? is perfection. Seriously.

slybrunette February 20 2009, 21:47:21 UTC

Aw thanks! I'm so glad you thought so!

aurorawest February 21 2009, 02:21:03 UTC

So lovely and heartbreaking.

Also, I've always thought that that line from 'Your Ex-Lover is Dead' was screaming to be used in conjunction with a Faraday fic. :)

slybrunette February 21 2009, 04:11:19 UTC

Right? The moment I heard the song and that line I knew it was going to have to have something to do with Daniel.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

crystalizedfrog March 20 2009, 04:47:56 UTC

I adore this!

slybrunette March 21 2009, 15:16:32 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this!