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Jul 21, 2008 17:39

Title: Cheers Darlin'
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Jack, Shannon
Word Count: 504
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: astra2104 wanted fic with the prompt 'Ice'.
Summary: A bar. Him. Regrets and failures swallow him whole and his hand shakes around his half-empty (and it is always half-empty) glass.

The story begins the same way they all do.

A bar. Him. Regrets ( Read more... )

fandom: lost, !fic, character: lost: shannon, challenge: lostsquee, character: lost: jack

Comments 22

emiliglia October 8 2008, 00:59:28 UTC

Oooh this was eerie I loved it! Jack all broken... It would make sense that he would see Shannon, too. She didn't beat around the bush, was straight forward and Jack needs straight forward. Also he probably feels a different sort of guilt over her death than he does with Boone since he didn't even get the chance to try and save her. I really liked this!

slybrunette October 10 2008, 02:06:42 UTC

Jack needs things spelled out for him at this point -- Shannon's perfect for that.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

janie_tangerine October 19 2008, 18:42:06 UTC

Totally late to the party, but this was really good. You got Jack's voice perfectly here, it just feels like his flashforward self, and I can really see Shannon's ghost having that effect on him and being harsh. That's just her attitude. And God, poor Jack. Really good job!