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[slybrunette]

Title: Color Inside The Lines (And Other Rules Juliet Breaks)
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Juliet, Jack, Kate. Jack/Juliet, Jack/Kate.
Word Count: 1,048
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Up to 4.10 - Something Nice Back Home
Summary: She lives in a hotel, and when she leaves in the mornings she gets a look from the man at the front desk as he leaves after the

Comments

[allibabab]

lovely, lovely, lovely. i think the last section is my favorite, how it's the hardest and the easiest thing she's ever done. i like that you have her leaving him instead of the other way around -- i think it says something about her, and i think it definitely says something about your way of characterizing her. in a good way! great job with this.

[slybrunette]

Well sometimes, in my experience, it can be both the hardest and the easiest, for very different reasons. And I honestly think Juliet is smart enough and mature enough to stop kidding herself. It's what makes her so much better than half of the other characters on the show.

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[supergossipgirl]

jack should so leave kate for juliet
but i still like how juliet left jack instead of him leaving her

[slybrunette]

Sometimes I agree. It really depends on the day. And yeah, I'm tired of the guy always leaving the girl. Juliet's smarter than that.

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[slybrunette]

Kate is...blind, I think is a good word. I don't know, sometimes I like her, sometimes I don't. I happen to be a Jater (who writes everything) so it's kind of hard to say I'm not biased.

He does need to fix himself. She deserves better than the way he is in the future, especially since it's not her mess that made him like that.

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[slybrunette]

Well it certainly does say that much, but the implications make the story. They always do.

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[6degreesoflea]

It's so sad seeing Jules being late, not being able to Jack all to herself. I'd love for them to be together but I love that she stopped kidding herself and was the one to end it. Nice work :)

-watching the man that is only sometimes hers leave, and the illusion breaks.
-She doesn’t know which man she’s talking about anymore.
-water dripping down out of her hair and into her face, droplets catching on the tips of her lashes, like diamonds.

-It’s both the hardest and the easiest thing she’s ever done.
This last line is amazing.

[slybrunette]

Juliet is a smart woman -- she wouldn't be played for a fool, and she wasn't here.

I'm glad you liked that (and those) lines :) Thanks for reading!