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[slybrunette]

Title: Every Man For Himself
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Sawyer, Miles
Word Count: 718
Rating: PG 
Author's Note: My first try at any of the four new characters -- it had to come some time I guess.
Summary: Post 4.9 - The Shape Of Things To Come. Sawyer knows Miles watches him. It's not that he's unused to the attention; it's just usually he's

Comments

[elliotsmelliot]

Good job with interrogating Sawyer and introducing Miles into your repertoire!

he wonders when he did start worrying so much about these people.

That type of thing sneaks up on you, Sawyer, and you wear it well.

[slybrunette]

It does appear to have snuck up on him, though I doubt they'll ever mess with that on the show. It's just my observations turned into fic. As for Miles, he was very hard to write and I'm not sure I really get him, but it was worth a shot.

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[slybrunette]

Sawyer does appear to have...grown up for lack of a better word. This is the first time I've actually liked him since Season Two, so I guess it's a good thing.

As for Miles, he's definitely a toughie to write.

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[gottalovev]

yep, sawyer started caring and I am pretty sure he's the first surprised. from an outside POV, like Miles, he really must look a lot like Jack, I love that idea!

[slybrunette]

I like doing the POV of outsiders, although usually I stick to Claire. Sometimes Juliet. I really never considered any of the four newbies, but I got to write them all sometime.

Sawyer, when he's seperate from Jack, at least IMO, kind of...takes on some of his qualities. We see it mid-Season 3 when Hurley tried to get him to be the leader, we're kind of seeing it now. So I thought I'd play with that.

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[aboutbunnies]

I loved this, especially the last line. Sawyer did start to care, and I bet it confuses the hell out of him when he thinks of it. Great job with Miles, too.

[slybrunette]

Oh I'm sure it does, and I kind of love it :)

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[fosfomifira]

It must be such a shock for Sawyer to realize that he actually cares about these people, that he wants nothing more than for them to be safe, that there's no hidden agenda in his concern.

I can see this sort of dialoge happening on the show. Miles sure doesn't have any problems asking questions. He would notice these things and speak out, he's not one to keep his doubts to himself.

[slybrunette]

Sawyer has been very much about taking care of himself, but I'm noticing more and more that his mentality is starting to become very 'us' and 'them'. I'm not sure why that came about but I kind of like it,

Miles is definitely...opinionated, to say it kindly. I figured of anyone he'd be the one who would ask.

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