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slybrunette

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Apr 16, 2008 18:07

Title: Better In Theory
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Characters/Pairings: Meredith, implied Meredith/Derek
Word Count: 188
Rating: PG
Prompt: For
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fandom: lost, character: lost: desmond, character: lost: juliet, ship: lost: desmond/juliet, fandom: grey's anatomy, !fic, character: ga: meredith

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slybrunette April 17 2008, 02:16:01 UTC

Thanks! Progress is definitely what i aim for.

Glad you liked them!

jime22 April 16 2008, 22:54:20 UTC

Amazing, I love your writing style :)

slybrunette April 17 2008, 02:16:38 UTC

Thank you so much :) I'm glad you liked it!

halfdutch April 16 2008, 23:29:03 UTC

Oh, thank you! I was very curious to see what you'd do with this pairing and this was a whole lot of angst! I like how she tries to find what she has in common with Desmond and even though it might be more than with anyone else, it's still not enough. I can't imagine those left behind will have an easy time of it. More anxious than ever now for Lost to come back. One week!!!

slybrunette April 17 2008, 02:20:45 UTC

I got prompted with Desmond/Juliet once before...and what I wrote was horrible. This is...an improvement. And when do I ever write happy? Yeah, pretty much never.

Can't wait for more Lost to see how it plays out on the show :)

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for an intriguing prompt and for reading :)

archibalds April 17 2008, 00:29:36 UTC

Hi new friend :)

I really enjoyed reading the Grey's story because you've truly captured the essence of Meredith and who she really is/who she can't be. Great job as always!

slybrunette April 17 2008, 19:02:25 UTC

*waves*

Meredith is fun. I know I say that a lot but she is. She's a whole lot of complicated and I thoroughly enjoy that.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

elliotsmelliot April 17 2008, 01:42:38 UTC

That ten foot pole just got a lot shorter!

This was really interesting. Juliet made such frank observations about herself and anyone else. I totally believe she and Desmond will always be the outsiders, only invited in when the rest are outnumbered by the Others. I love how she misses things big and small. That was a killer last line.

I know it's bad, but every time you write something I think you must be 1000 years old because you have an excellent grasp of human behaviour.

slybrunette April 17 2008, 19:05:07 UTC

LOL.

I think at some point we all have a bit of a group mentality. It's very hard to get on the inside of preformed groups and even if you do sometimes it's just not worth the hassle. Here, with a bunch of freaked out and fucked up people I imagine it would be even harder.

Gosh, so what will I be like when I'm 50 then ;) I'll take it as a compliment then hun, so thanks.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!