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Mar 27, 2008 21:43

Title: Ever The Same
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Michael
Word Count: 456
Rating: PG
Prompt: Character Prompt Day 2 at
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fandom: lost, !fic, character: lost: michael, challenge: lostsquee

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slybrunette March 29 2008, 01:58:17 UTC

I think about you every time I write Michael, I swear. So compliments from you mean the absolute world to me.

This is pretty much in line with S4, in case you're wondering. And yeah, they're not close, but they sure can fake it. What people see on the surface is not necessarily the truth. And yeah, the island just about killed Michael and Walt, considering he told Walt that he killed Ana/Libby and that...freaked the kid out a little I think.

Anyways, I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading! I really appreciate it :)

gottalovev March 28 2008, 17:16:40 UTC

I really love it! there are some strong images that really made me stop reading (sand underneath his skin... awesome).

it's short, as sketch of a situation, but oh so vivid =D

slybrunette March 29 2008, 02:13:04 UTC

You know describing it as a sketch works really well I think. I was going for imagery here, with no dialogue, just the sensations and what was going on. So thanks for that actually :)

I'm glad you liked this!

zelda_zee March 28 2008, 21:42:49 UTC

I like the feeling of loneliness here, how Michael is cut off from everyone. I've had issues with him as a character, but with MKJ I'm really interested in him again, especially with fic like this coming out of it. An interesting read!

slybrunette March 29 2008, 02:17:19 UTC

I do a lot with Michael. I kind of like to torture him a little bit, and get inside his head. I know a lot of people don't like him so much, but I think MKJ softened him up a bit, or at least removed this idea that he was a boring, cold character.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

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slybrunette March 29 2008, 02:20:38 UTC

Thanks hun :) And I am going to keep posting fic, that's for sure. Especially with all of this lovely encouragement.

I'm glad you liked this!

mrslinus17 March 28 2008, 23:45:44 UTC

LOVE.

Michael fic? I really, really loved it, considering. Very interesting.

slybrunette March 29 2008, 19:43:00 UTC

I write Michael. Especially during hiatuses for some reason. So I'm glad you liked it :)

Thanks for reading!