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Mar 24, 2008 21:41

Title: Stand Up When Your World's Crashing Down
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Juliet, mentions of Locke and Sawyer
Word Count: 220
Rating: PG
Prompt: HERE
Summary: She doesn't believe her own eyes until she walks outside.

The sky turns purple.

A storm rolls in and through the thick clouds the sky colors violet. And she remembers the last time it did ( Read more... )

fandom: lost, character: lost: juliet, !fic, table: fanfic100

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jenthegypsy March 25 2008, 01:54:48 UTC
Whoa! Excellent use of the pic prompt, and eerie look into the future of those left behind.

Only Sawyer looks down, regret in his eyes. Oh, Sawyer...

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slybrunette March 25 2008, 01:55:58 UTC
Thanks! I've had this in my head since I saw the picture, just had a hard time wording it.

And Sawyer...he's going to regret this, I know it.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

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zelda_zee March 25 2008, 07:44:33 UTC
Wonderful, eerie ficlet. Oh, I hope they're not doomed, but I fear...

I loved the line about Rachel's amethyst necklace.

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slybrunette March 25 2008, 19:35:03 UTC
I hope they're not either, but this is Lost...so I'm thinking in worst case scenarios.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

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callisto_blake March 25 2008, 09:53:41 UTC
Everyone waits.

It is so much in these two words. Congrats.

Purple like the end of the world.

Purple never will be the same. Thanks for that.

(PS I start to be a fan-girl, isn't I? I hate hate hate myself xD*

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slybrunette March 25 2008, 19:53:05 UTC
Hee, I think I changed the meaning for myself too. But it is my favorite color.

I'm glad you liked this! And come on over to the dark side, I'm a fangirl too :)

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gottalovev March 25 2008, 13:33:54 UTC
oh, wow, that's some great use of the picture! I love it, especially Locke and Sawyer's reaction.

great ending too!

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slybrunette March 25 2008, 20:02:10 UTC
Is it weird that that was the first thing I thought of when I saw the picture?

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

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lovelornity March 25 2008, 13:47:46 UTC
This was amazing! It is absolutely perfectly written, just as it is, but I cannot help but want more! To know what ill-fated event this storm is an omen of "...the people who wanted to be here. The people who thought they knew better." "...Only Sawyer looks down, regret in his eyes." Poor Sawyer. Poor Losties left behind. Great use of the prompt!

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slybrunette March 26 2008, 02:10:37 UTC
There was more but I didn't like it. So I cut it out. But yeah, I saw the picture and I couldn't help but think of the S2 finale.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

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