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Mar 24, 2008 16:26

Title: You Can Say What You Mean But It Won't Change A Thing
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Jack, Kate
Word Count: 872
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: #11 - Questions for 12_stories
Summary: "We crashed; eight people survived that, and two died right afterwards. We got off when a passing ship found us." Her voice is less confrontational now that he's stopped fighting her ( Read more... )

character: lost: kate, ship: lost: jack/kate, table: 12_stories, fandom: lost, !fic, character: lost: jack

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slybrunette March 24 2008, 21:04:32 UTC

I hate writing just purely shippery pieces. It needs plot. And like I said to you, this is plot based with undertones.

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slybrunette March 24 2008, 21:10:05 UTC

Yeah, I like the dark Kate, not this bullshit they are putting on the show. She is manipulative; she is not a damsel. I don't think that they are being forced to do it, I think they are doing it because they want to. That's my story and I'm sticking with it.

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october_sky815 March 24 2008, 22:19:09 UTC

*sighs because I wants a Jack episode soooo badly!!!!* (and Jate...)

I agree, beautiful. So heartbreaking and real. It's interesting to think of how they came up with these plans, and I loved your interpretation of it; who would be okay with it, who wouldn't. This builds towards where we are in the show and I love how you wrote it. The referances to the island were great and I love this part:

"Jack’s not so sure he likes this side of her very much. He’s always known she had it in her but he never had to acknowledge it until it was staring him dead in the face."

Everything's so different now, unlike they thought it would be, and you represented that fantastically in this. Great job!

slybrunette March 25 2008, 01:02:31 UTC

Things never turn out the way that you think they will. That's life and unfortunately that carries over to the show. This is definitely not where we all imagined things going in Season One.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

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slybrunette March 25 2008, 01:03:01 UTC

We so do.

Glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

jenthegypsy March 24 2008, 23:41:25 UTC

*applause* Kate got her spine back :) - Kate's still leading men around by the nose :( Great ficlet, as always.

slybrunette March 25 2008, 01:03:48 UTC

It would be nice for her to get that back yeah, she's been...pretty spineless. And brainless.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!