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[slybrunette]

Title: In The Winding Down Hours
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Claire, Jack/Sawyer
Word Count: 409
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: #5 - Syzygy for

Comments

[alemyrddin]

No one else ever notices. There are no special smiles or gestures. She’s pretty sure they never tell anyone. But the few glimpses she gets of them every now and then make her acutely aware that, yes, there is something there. Something that isn’t just sexual.

I loved how you described the J/S relationship through Claire's eyes, and how she felt protective of them because they have found something worthy her silence. This was beautiful.

[slybrunette]

It's always fun to do things from an outsider's perspective because it's not so emotion focused. It's about observations and how Claire percieves them. And that's what made this fun to write.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[elise_509]

How do you write so much fic? I am amazed. I'm such a slow writer, it's a really awesome talent to be able to write prolifically; I'm totally jealous. ;)

This is great! There's such a shortage of Jack/Sawyer fic lately, and I have a little voyeurism kink (that only seems to apply to J/S!) and this is totally awesome in that way. I like Claire's view on what's going on between them and how she sees something more there, and how she just can't look away. I also love how she becomes protective of the two of them at the end, wanting to help protect what they have from being destroyed.

*loves you*

[slybrunette]

I get into a writing kick and I write for days on end. I just don't sleep that much.

There isn't very much J/S fic...that kind of pisses me off but given canon it makes sense. And even though I'm not a Claire fan I love writing from her perspective for some reason (maybe since I don't understand it).

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!