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[slybrunette]

Title: In The Winding Down Hours
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Claire, Jack/Sawyer
Word Count: 409
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: #5 - Syzygy for

Comments

[siluria]

It's really cool to see a slash pairing from the other side, and I love how you wrote this! I also really like how Claire's willing to look out for them too :)

[slybrunette]

I always like doing things from an outsider's perspective so this was definitely interesting to write.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[callisto_blake]

I was waiting for your lost fanfic with good pairing, and it is. *purr* I read. And I read again. Still, I hate Jack. But it doesn't matter, because here he's exactly like he should be here. Maybe because It's Claire's Jack, not Jack-Jack.
I don't like Claire. I don't like Jack/Sawyer (because It's Jack for the god's sake). But I love the way, you are writing them all. I don't understand that. Have I?

[slybrunette]

lol, hell, I don't understand why I write this stuff. I'm not a Claire fan either (though I am a Jack fan, as you may have guessed).

Anyway, I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[lovelornity]

I have never ventured down the Lost slash highway before, but I was really interested to see how you were going to work this out based on the prompts at lostsquee. This was very beautiful. I don't know if it was the music I was listening to at the time or your word choice, but there was something very soothing about this story. I love the idea of Claire watching not out of sexual desire, but seemingly out of the desire to see it through to the end.

It’s like reading a good book where you just have to know how it ends and if the protagonists get together by stories close.

Very nicely done!

[slybrunette]

Well, welcome to slash. Although I'm probably not the person who you should be exploring via but I'm glad that you are. The thing about Claire watching them...not everything is blantantly sexual. I think she watches a lot, observes, and I like that and kind of used it to my advantage.

And I'm curious, what music was it that you were listening to?

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[haldoor]

I like the idea that Claire's happy to keep their secret, and that her interest isn't merely prurient - it kinda makes for a different slant on things, 'cause I know if I was in her place, I'd be watching for the obvious reasons!

Thanks for sharing!

[slybrunette]

There's always some fun in knowing something that no one else knows. You feel part of something.

And yeah, I think most of us would be watching for those reasons too ;)

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[eponine119]

I love this!

It’s not about arousal for her. It’s the idea of it that enthralls her. The idea of them. Two people, who couldn’t be more different and yet somehow so similar, joined together by this situation, loneliness, and now perhaps something else.

Also, your header is fabulous!

[slybrunette]

I think that's my favorite part as well :)

As for the header, I wanted something with everyone in it, so thanks to marylou_gr I've got it.

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!