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[slybrunette]

Title: In The Winding Down Hours
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Claire, Jack/Sawyer
Word Count: 409
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: #5 - Syzygy for

Comments

[slybrunette]

Aw, thanks hun! You're so sweet!

And yeah, I'm finally getting shit done again. Miracles.

[mrslinus17]

I love it! Its a very inspired idea and I like how you brought Calire into it, because it could have been Claire or somebody else easily, so its nice you choose Claire.

Is this *almost* mirroring one of the missing scenes from Expose? Its on the S3 bonus features DVD. Just guessing. =]

[slybrunette]

I'm a fan of Jack/Sawyer/Claire (aka Jawyercita) and so Claire seeing the two of them felt strangely natural to me. I'm used to writing those three together in one way or another.

And no, it wasn't based off of that scene, but it is pretty similar now that I think of it.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[livefortonight]

I love this. Like someone else said, it reminds me of the deleted scene from Expose, but, like, a million times better, obviously

If it is something else, she never hears it. No declarations, no spoken feelings, but she’s always felt the unsaid was worth so much more.

That line. That is my favourite.

[slybrunette]

You know, I wasn't even thinking about that scene, probably because I kind of hated it. But yeah, it bears some resemblance I guess.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[crickets]

Eee! I love you! I love you! I love you! This was awesome. Youuuuu. This was just great. *contented sigh*

I think there's a typo here: "because she’s the only still up" - the only one?

[slybrunette]

Hee, I was on a roll yesterday -- this and Sawyer/Claire. I'm glad you liked it!

And yes, typo. I was in a rush and I do not have a beta. Thanks! It's fixed now!

[slybrunette]

Claire is very observant and I think I was pretty much relying on that with this fic. It's not exactly canon, but it could be some day.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!