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[slybrunette]

Title: I Had No Choice But To Hear You
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Alex centric. Very mild hints of Alex/Richard. 
Word Count: 1,287
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Post 4.08 - Meet Kevin Johnson. There's a lot of screaming and crying before someone finally gets a hold of her and jams a needle in her arm. A few seconds later her world starts to spin.

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Comments

[aboutbunnies]

I was hoping for some Alex fic after the last episode, and this certainly doesn't disappoint. I love how you used Richard in this. Great fic!

[slybrunette]

I really like to write Richard, I just don't do it very often, so I'm glad you liked him in this.

Thanks for reading hun!

[bachlava]

Good work. This was really hard to read; it does read like something that might pop up in canon. Of course, if that turns out the case, I might not be willing to watch, but the point is you've done a terrific job here.

*Hates canon.*

[slybrunette]

Aw, hun, I know you're upset about that, so the fact that you're even reading makes me happy. I'm glad you thought I did good with, even if it is what you don't want to happen.

Thanks for reading and reviewing hun! I really appreciate it!

[starseed4]

I missed the part about this being a Lost fic and thought Grey's when I saw Alex... but then I was like Richard/Alex?!? Chief?!?! I was so confused... especially when I started reading it lol. That is when I realized my mistake.

[slybrunette]

I really wish you were the first person who has done that...but no. Hence why I list the fandom lol.

[starseed4]

lol yeah, for those of us too excited at the prospect of fanfiction to actually figure out it isn't our fandom... XD

[gottalovev]

that was a great exploration of Alex and how she must be feeling. I am sure she'll want revenge too. and her observations on richard (more power than he wants to use) were so spot on IMHO

great coda!

[slybrunette]

Alex got screwed -- I'm almost sure of it. And if she did I think we're going to see a dark side of her, a side that wants revenge.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!

[october_sky815]

I loved this; it's really close to what I think will happen. Or that I would like to see happen. Only I think it would be cool if it was just Richard and his people behind this- though maybe, if you wanted to think so, I think you could say that there were hints that Richard could be lying in this story.

I really loved the ending. It sounds like something that really sets up for events to come, like something she would actually think and have to be prepared for then. I liked Richard in this too, and I think the traces of Richard/Alex worked. It wasn't too much, which was good, because then it would have just been one, weird for me, and two, taken away from the initial story. I like how he handled her being there, how he spoke about her past and tried to guide her. I can't wait to be able to see more from Richard, Alex, and even Ben in the show. Great job!

[slybrunette]

I can't just jump into a ship that isn't developed in stories like this. It's too reliant on canon. But I do love Richard/Alex, it's one of my ships, and I love working with both of their characters.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading!