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[slybrunette]

Title: The Routine
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Jack, mentions of others.
Word Count: 1,213
Rating: R
Timeline: Flashforward, prior to TTLG.
Summary: The alarm clock goes off. The woman next to him rolls over, hits a button, closes her eyes again. Good morning and here we go again. This is the routine.

I told you, Jack, I told you that you don’t

Comments

[uhzoomzip]

this is chilling. i could totally see this being the 'prequel' to TTLG. him calling kate sarah - wow.

love it, babe.

[slybrunette]

Thanks hun! I kept doing sequels to it -- but I always wanted to do something before TTLG, part of the why it happened.

I'm glad you liked this!

[lovexwentxred]

Wow. Great writing. Nice take on the FF in this story. :)

[slybrunette]

Thank you! I've had this fic on the brain for awhile now :)

[slybrunette]

I felt more for Kate than for Jack

That amuses me, since I wrote her as so friggin' distant here. You may not know this but I am not that big of a Kate fan. At all. Which is interesting cause I write her so much (this applies to Claire too...I have issues with the femmes)

Anyways, I'm really glad you liked this! Thanks so much for reading!

[eponine119]

Oh, ouch. Poor Jack. This is such a deeper look into his pain than in the finale. It hurts to read.

They left the others to die alone

This line kind of broke me.

[slybrunette]

That's what I was aiming for. Deep, and not so surface-y as what I'd been doing.

I'm so glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it :)

[mrslinus17]

Wow. That was just fantastic

The ending was so great & I loved how the choppiness of it, how it switchs from scene to scene & how the emotion is so raw

[slybrunette]

Thank you!

I like this writing style a lot -- I just ever get around to using it.

Glad you liked it!