Whoa. This is really good. The last line was a surprise to me, the good kind. He's my least favorite character, but you've included him perfectly here.
Oh my, this was excellent. The end was quite a shock as was re-reading it knowing it was him and being struck by the idea that he is all alone. (Where is Walt?) This would be an excellent opening to season 4.
I purposely left Walt's whereabouts to the imagination. But really, would you want to be associated with someone who did what Michael did? I think not.
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I can't wait to see what they do with Michael this year. I was actually really happy that they're bringing him back, so that they can resolve his storyline.
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His conscience is another story.
Oh, wow! Is it wrong to be so happy that the MRB is alone? Great work!
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I really am dying to see what they're doing with Michael this season.
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