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Jan 23, 2008 21:57

Title: The Welcome Home You'll Never Recieve
Fandom: Lost
Word Count: 141
Rating: PG
Prompt: Homecoming for
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fandom: lost, !fic, character: lost: michael, challenge: lostsquee

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eponine119 January 24 2008, 03:14:37 UTC
Whoa. This is really good. The last line was a surprise to me, the good kind. He's my least favorite character, but you've included him perfectly here.

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slybrunette January 24 2008, 03:15:53 UTC
I purposely didn't say who it was because I wanted it to be a surprise. He's not one of my favorites either, but I write him A LOT. Don't know why.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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hendercats January 24 2008, 03:22:03 UTC
His head is suddenly clear, sober.
His conscience is another story.
Oh, wow! Is it wrong to be so happy that the MRB is alone? Great work!

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slybrunette January 24 2008, 16:52:33 UTC
I don't blame you one bit for that happiness.

Thanks for reading!

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aboutbunnies January 24 2008, 04:09:25 UTC
Wow. Very jarring and wonderful. Love that this is Michael!

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slybrunette January 24 2008, 16:58:54 UTC
Thanks! It's sort of in-line with a story I did about a year ago, so it was pretty quick for me to just whip up.

I'm glad you liked this!

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elliotsmelliot January 24 2008, 05:17:59 UTC
Oh my, this was excellent. The end was quite a shock as was re-reading it knowing it was him and being struck by the idea that he is all alone. (Where is Walt?) This would be an excellent opening to season 4.

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slybrunette January 24 2008, 17:03:36 UTC
I purposely left Walt's whereabouts to the imagination. But really, would you want to be associated with someone who did what Michael did? I think not.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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elise_509 January 24 2008, 06:17:24 UTC
OMG, you are awesome. Simply put. Awesome.

I really am dying to see what they're doing with Michael this season.

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slybrunette January 24 2008, 17:08:54 UTC
I can't wait to see what they do with Michael this year. I was actually really happy that they're bringing him back, so that they can resolve his storyline.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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