I thought about going back and changing my prompt to something involving Jack and his dad, so this was a special treat. :)
This is exactly how I'd imagine Jack would approach Halloween (in terms of being a perfectionist), and I (not surprisingly) enjoyed the back story of Jack and the holiday. I also loved the way Kate responded once she'd caught on.
The mental image of Kate trying not to laugh at Jack trying to figure out where to put the pumpkin was pretty darn amusing, too. :)
Well I might take that prompt as well. I'm still working on your first one btw.
That said, I'm glad that you liked the bit of backstory I tried to work in there. I wasn't quite sure where I was going so it was kind of just me typing whatever came to mind. So you can imagine I'm pleased that you like it.
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and i liked the insight into their pasts and why jack is umm the way he is
Also reminded me of mer not being allowed to go trick or treating this childhood angst thing don't we love it
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I wanted to do something with their pasts and I sort of accomplished what I was getting at and sort of didn't but I'm glad you liked it.
And yeah, we must all love the angst.
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This is exactly how I'd imagine Jack would approach Halloween (in terms of being a perfectionist), and I (not surprisingly) enjoyed the back story of Jack and the holiday. I also loved the way Kate responded once she'd caught on.
The mental image of Kate trying not to laugh at Jack trying to figure out where to put the pumpkin was pretty darn amusing, too. :)
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That said, I'm glad that you liked the bit of backstory I tried to work in there. I wasn't quite sure where I was going so it was kind of just me typing whatever came to mind. So you can imagine I'm pleased that you like it.
Thanks for reading!
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I'm glad you thought I captured Kate's approach to the relationship well. Thanks for reading!
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