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[slybrunette]

Title: The Outsiders
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Juliet, mentions of numerous other characters.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 567
Prompt: #38 - Outcast for

Comments

[slybrunette]

Aw, thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I feel kind of rusty with my writing lately so every review means a lot to me. Especially yours :)

[slybrunette]

Thanks! I haven't had much experience writing her, but her character really interests me. She is very, very observant and I love that about her. And the brackets were really what I felt most comfortable with so I'm glad you picked up on those.

Numb is a very good word for it actually.

I'm thrilled that you liked this! Thanks for taking a chance with it and reading, it means a lot to me.

[elliotsmelliot]

This is a really interesting interpretation of Juliet's rational side. Despite her insistence that becoming one of them would hamper her self-preservation, I think she longs to connect with people. I liked the parallels she with drew with Desmond and her admonishment that everyone should wake up and realize that bad things happen here.

[slybrunette]

I agree, she does long to connect but she's also (stealing from the above post) numb to a degree as well and that keeps her from connecting.

I'm glad you thought it was interesting. Thanks for reading!

[slybrunette]

Thank you! I love Juliet too, so it's nice to hear that I've written her well.

I never linked Juliet with Desmond (although I can see why you did, smart catch) before a friend of mine asked me to write the two of them. That's what got me thinking about how I could. That's why I love prompts.

I'm glad you liked this!

[bebitched]

Very nicely done, using her status as an outsider to have a more objective view of the camp. But LOL @ scarlet letter.

[slybrunette]

Yeah, I've always wanted to do the 'outside looking in' thing, but I can't write Desmond, and he was the other option.

Also, the scarlet letter thing was because of you.

Thanks for reading!

(Aren't you supposed to be at the mall)