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slybrunette

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Jun 04, 2007 17:42

Title: Shadows
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Juliet, Kate, mentions of other characters
Rating: PG
Prompt: #03 - Ends for
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fandom: lost, !fic, table: fanfic100

Comments 32

kawaiispinel June 4 2007, 21:57:01 UTC

I loved it! The dialogue was spot-on, and the whole thing was so perfectly brilliant. And Juliet letting go like that is just so painfully true to her character. Wonderful work! :)

slybrunette June 4 2007, 22:23:06 UTC

Thank you! I was debating whether or not to post this so I'm glad I did now.

theagonyofblank June 5 2007, 06:23:06 UTC

wow. i loved this! the tone of this definitely reminded me of that of the flash-forward. really good, and really... true. very nice!

slybrunette June 5 2007, 19:04:10 UTC

I've been trying to keep with that same tone but it is kind of hard. Overly mysterious for my tastes actually.

I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading!

theagonyofblank June 6 2007, 21:17:16 UTC

Yeah, it was pretty mysterious. We weren't really given a lot of information. XD. The mindf*ck at the end was crazy though.

Did you claim Juliet for fanfic100?

slybrunette June 6 2007, 22:14:07 UTC

Yeah, I claimed her a few months ago, when I was on a severe Juliet kick.

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uhzoomzip June 5 2007, 14:48:56 UTC

this was an interesting perspective, with kate and juliet and their opposite reactions to broken!jack.

nicely done!

slybrunette June 5 2007, 19:17:17 UTC

I'd been wanting to write from Juliet's POV for awhile. This kind of called to me.

Thanks for reading!

lady_e2484 June 5 2007, 16:03:38 UTC

Loved this !!!!

Juliet letting go at the end was just heartbreaking ;(

xxx

slybrunette June 5 2007, 19:23:06 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

crickets June 5 2007, 18:47:53 UTC

I really liked this. I have a hard time with Juliet. And seeing the contrast here between her and Kate was interesting. Well done!

slybrunette June 5 2007, 19:25:58 UTC

I set myself to hate Juliet. And then I tried really, really hard to do so. It didn't work. At all. So of course I had to go and write something, and I originally had this as more femmeslash-y but then (like everything else) it became all about Jack.

So I'm glad you liked it (this is more of my normal thing, btw, the other stuff like Ohana is kind of used sparingly). Thanks for reading!

crickets June 5 2007, 19:31:51 UTC

For me, and I say this cautiously, it's all about Elizabeth Mitchell. To me, she's just so wooden and I can't get past it. Any potential the character may or may not have loses me in her performance or her mannuerisms or whatever. Sadly, I don't even KNOW if I like Juliet as a character. Honestly. I just can't get past the vessel.

slybrunette June 5 2007, 19:35:27 UTC

I have heard that from some people. I tend to disagree, but then again I don't really get what some people see in the acting of a few other of our actors. It is hard to like a character when you don't like the actor's style. Way too hard to get past that, because it's really up to the actor to show you the character.