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[slybrunette]

Title: Shadows
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairings: Juliet, Kate, mentions of other characters
Rating: PG
Prompt: #03 - Ends for

Comments

[bebitched]

I like that Kate and Juliet were sorta friends. I think they would be, in any other situation.

[slybrunette]

Sort of friends who are kind of ready to kill each other. Yeah. Fun. I don't know, you know I wasn't too sure about this. I still feel the same way about it.

[bebitched]

Honestly, I just don't like Juliet. It's a good plot idea, so I know why you did it, plus your claim, but I would have done Kate and someone else. Mostly because I don't feel comfortable writing Juliet and I think there's more of a basis between the other femmes. I'll shut up now.

[slybrunette]

What is with everyone today. All the Juliet hating *shakes head* I know you would've done someone else but honestly this wasn't even supposed to have Kate in it. Then it was supposed to be femmeslash. But apparently I'm so tired of Kate that I can't even do that.

And yes, the shutting up, because personally Juliet and Kate are the only two I give a shit about, and therefore will write about. You and I have very different opinions, and I do what works for me.

[tranquil_me]

Lovely piece!! You have really great style, condensed and not too wordy, which is of great value to me, since I tend to get too ..ah..picturesque in my own writing

[slybrunette]

I wish I could be as descriptive as some people are. That's a skill I envy. I guess the grass is always greener on the other side.

Kate and Juliet are fun to play with, especially against each other. A lot of people don't see that connection as readily as I do though, so I'm glad that you do.

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed this!

[tranquil_me]

But your writing is descriptive! There's just a fine line between being descriptive and overdoing narrative up to the point where everyhing gets so bland and diluted and you managed to avoid that. That's something!

[slybrunette]

*blushes* Well, thanks!