Part 2...

[slybrunette]

016. evolution

They stop trying to kid themselves about this being just a fling right around the time Kate blows Sawyer off when he asks if she wants company on one of her food finding missions, and then takes Shannon instead of him. She could feel his eyes on their retreating backs; see the confused expression he wore. And she laughed when she

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[bebitched]

You know, for someone that doesn't write femmeslash you're pretty good at it.

This is exactly how I would imagine Shannon and Kate in a relationship. And Shannon isn't anywhere near as out of character in this as she is in mine.

[slybrunette]

Good writers can write things they don't like (re: me and Skate). But thank you.

She's really not THAT out of character in yours. Sorta but not as bad as you think.

[bebitched]

Well someone has been to bandcamp because you defineately know how to toot your own horn. Just kidding.

[slybrunette]

LOL. That was my cocky phase yesterday. I wholeheartedly apologize for that.

[slybrunette]

I gave up midway, and then figured that I couldn't just waste two weeks worth of stuff. So I finished. You should go back and try to finish it even if the challenge is closed just to say you're done.

These two are hard to write but I always wanted to. But Shannon is so much like two different people that it would make the relationship very interesting.

The Shannon/Sawyer comparison comes from my love of that ship actually, and the fact that they're two sides of the same coin in a way.

Thanks for reading!

[random_zombie]

I really enjoyed this fic...glad you decided to finish it.

[slybrunette]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[lil_orli]

I've never really thought of Shannon/Kate but this was really beautiful the last one was especially heartbreaking.

It's funny until shannon died i didn't realise how much i would miss her character, there was something wonderfully broken and beautiful about her.

[slybrunette]

When I saw the prompts I just had to use Kate/Shannon because that was the "fun" pairing, as opposed to Kate/Sun where I might have to get deeper into it. That last one was kind of hard to write actually so I'm glad it had some effect.

That's actually how I was with Boone (yes, I am a Boone fan but I wasn't until he died. It has to do with him being part of my ship).

Thanks for reading!

[lionheart34]

Very well written, quite powerful :)
You did a good job writing this :)

[slybrunette]

Thank you!

[theagonyofblank]

wow. very nice. and depressing, at the end... but nice all the same. ^^

[slybrunette]

I wanted to end it sometime around Abandoned so unfortunately that called for an angsty-depressing tone. Glad you liked it!