[FIC] touch the heart. g. ohno/aiba fluff. 1083 words.

[littlealex]

Title: Touch the Heart
Group: Arashi
Pairing/Genre: Ohno/Aiba, fluff
Rating: G
Word Count: 1083 words
Summary: Aiba knows lots of things that Ohno doesn't.
Notes: Written for maiaide, original post here. Remixed for jentfic-remix by basil-ovelby into Der Traum des Oenghus.

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[citlecrewolf]

That's a sweet story, I'll have to have a wander and see if you posted a sequel :)

[littlealex]

I'm glad you liked it! I'm not sure about a sequel, seeing as it was a one-shot for a prompt - but you never know, I might be inspired. ;) Thank you for commenting!

[aikomidori]

Aiba ♥ He's too endearing *_____* And I like Leader's quiet attention to Aiba's comments throughout - it makes for the nice ambience and now I want dim sum lah~

[littlealex]

Aiba really is adorable ♥ And yes, I may have written this fic when I was a little hungry... ;)

[aidill]

I found really funny that every little piece of information begins with "Leader did you know..." even the confession! ^___^

[littlealex]

haha, I had to include it like that - otherwise the story might have been a little boring otherwise. ;) Thanks for commenting! ♥

[zazasukie]

Oh! Ohno and Aiba as a pair! That's quite unusual... and this story is really sweet! I liked it a lot!

[littlealex]

I'm glad you liked it! There is always room for rare pairs in my heart ;) Thanks for the comment! ♥

[twilit_tempest]

I'm sorry I'm terrible at reviews and so I never leave them, but I just had to let you know that I absolutely loved this. The pace and characterization were excellent. It had a strong beginning and a strong ending. I don't really get AibaxOhno but you made it totally realistic and sweet and I enthusiastically applaud you.

It was just...Okay, I'm a writer myself and so this will sound lame...but it was just so well-written. There were no unneccessary words. The flow was excellent. I love recurring things like the "Did you know..." you used in this story. It was overall a wonderful piece of writing.

I saw you weren't planning a sequel, seeing as its a one-shot for a prompt, and I totally understand that, but if you ever get inspired go with it. You're awesome.

[littlealex]

Thank you so much! This was a lovely piece of feedback. It's so nice to hear that even little things I write like this are read and loved. Thank you for the kind words, I'm glad you liked it so much! ♥