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myjulien December 29 2010, 16:09:04 UTC
This was somehow hard to read and I rather think I'll keep coming back to it a lot in my mind... Actually I'm probably going to paste it in a Pages document and save it, if you don't mind. I also wanted to tell you I think most people aspire to write like this.

I'm sorry, I had vague intentions of pasting several quotes and generally leaving that kind of comment that highlights just how much the fic is loved/great but really, for this I think it's in everything, how it all worked/was pulled together. This was incredibly thoughtful and inspiring. I rarely say this for fic but thank you for writing this.

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littlealex December 30 2010, 02:54:21 UTC
!!! Thank you for such a wonderful comment ♥ I hardly feel worthy of it, and it means a lot to me. I'm not sure I did a lot of the themes I brought up justice, and I constantly curse jentfic-remix for making me want to write every story I start from the opposite point of view, but I think that writing this from Sho's perspective would be far more difficult. I'm glad you loved it, even if it was hard to read in places. ♥♥♥

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astrangerenters December 29 2010, 17:50:30 UTC
You weren't kidding about the porn were you ( ... )

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littlealex December 30 2010, 03:13:41 UTC
haha no, I was NOT kidding about the porn. I did try to make it have a point, though, which was why I didn't really include much more of it later - it wasn't really necessary. I hoped that writing so much up front would keep it in people's minds as they read what felt more like gen fic, at least when I was writing it. You can sort of read it from part two, without the porn, but I felt like it was an important stepping-stone to what went on later, even though it's not the focus.

I'm so glad you liked it! I will always be annoyed at myself that I didn't write it earlier, but I'm happy with the result and thrilled that you are too. :D ♥♥♥

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xanderave December 30 2010, 16:49:11 UTC
I can't give a very complex comment to this story but when I found it, I immediately had to share it with my friends and they enjoyed it as much as I did especially with the hidden problems each of the member carry and getting too much into their drama character, they forget to take care of themselves. And the ways they choose to release their stress.

Very happy to have read this.

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littlealex December 31 2010, 03:37:44 UTC
I'm glad you liked it so much, and thank you for passing it onto your friends. ♥

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statr December 31 2010, 04:31:03 UTC
Reading this has been such an emotional ride.
Thank you. ♥

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littlealex December 31 2010, 06:43:08 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm glad it got to you :) ♥

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iupdarlin December 31 2010, 04:33:38 UTC
I love that this story was about more than the sex between Sakumoto. Stories where the two really care about each other (while somewhat one-sided in this one) are truly enjoyable to me, and add to that the whole of Arashi caring for each other, it makes for a wonderful story. They've said themselves that Arashi is different from family and friends, something more, and you could tell that if this story is anything like reality.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing!!

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littlealex December 31 2010, 06:45:01 UTC
I'm glad you liked it so much; I tried to keep it as balanced as I could. Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

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