"Death Does Not Become Him" Chapter 7 Orlibean

[slave_o_spike]

Here you guys go, because I know it's driving some of you crazy. *smirks evilly*

Title: Death Does Not Become HimChapter 7

Comments

[jackieville]

Poor Orlando!!!

I'm going to have nightmares with that hammer in Seanie's skull!!!

I'm glad it's not the end and I can't wait to see how Orli saves Sean this time!!! *bounces*

[slave_o_spike]

*pets Orlando*

*pets accident-prone Sean*

Thank you!!!!!

*bounces with you*

[tdorian]

Maria, strike the pose ! click.eh eh...
So, u got more reviews on ur RL...hum, only means u have to write original based on it !
Anyway, for me in your stories or in whatever u share with us about ur RL it's always so funny that i can' miss them.This chapter was wonderful !! I've laughed like crazy at Orlando's attack.He really as some tricks ! LOL And of course i was sure you had some twist for us.I know u better...lol Aida

[slave_o_spike]

I should so write original fic based on my life. Best seller!

Okay, so yesterday's RL post was pretty funny! LOL!

Yep, you know me with the twisties. I am so evil. :P

Thanks Aida!!!

[gingerale2u]

oh just great! a hammer?! nothing wrong with your imagination.. haha.. lovely chapter and Officer Urban was soo cool!

-Lorelai

[slave_o_spike]

Well hello!

Hell! I'd let Urban take me in. *ahem*

Yeah, a hammer. There are things running around in my head, I could tell you stories...

Well, LOL, I am!

Thank you!!!!

[namarielorien]

I don't usually read WIPs until they are finished, but I stumbled in on this one and now I'm hooked! I loved this chapter where Orli being a slut actually helped him thru the situation with the intruder. Loved the thought of Orli going down on Jimmy! Too funny! I was waiting on pins and needles for this chapter, and now I'll be waiting impatiently for the next one, too. Thanks for writing such an interesting story!

Ginger

[slave_o_spike]

Hi! I totally get you on the WIPs. I have an outline for this so I already planned out everything that will happen and how it will end. No worries. A lot of stories are made up as they go along.

Oh yeah...Jimmy and Orli...

...

Where was I?

Glad you took a chance. Thank you! Next chapter - the cops come and it's Sean's POV. :)

[cereajeb]

you know, i am quite conflicted at this point. on the one hand, i'm very glad we have more of this fic; on the other, WHY THE HELL DOES SEAN KEEP GETTING INTO THESE DAMN SITUATIONS?!?!?!?! i mean, really....

superb chapter, and i especially liked the tricks orlando learned (knew there had to be a reason he gets made into a slut so often :) and WHAT is that bastard robber hiding??? *is nervous*

also, kudos for adding in shia. i havent seen transformers (tho i have seen disturbia!) but that doesnt matter; to me, he will always be louis from even stevens (if you dont know what im talking about, just dont ask...trust me on this one :/

again, superb chapter, and i cant wait to see where this is going now!

[slave_o_spike]

Yeah, Sean is a bit accident-prone. *ahem*

You'll learn so enough about the robber and oh yeah! Slut!Orli to the rescue! LOL!

*pets Orli*

I don't think he's a slut. I think he's just energetic. :)

Oh yeah. I so know about Even Stevens. That was the only show I let my kids watch on the Disney channel. I love Shia (Hutch Boy).

Thank you! :)