"Death Does Not Become Him" Chapter 7 Orlibean

[slave_o_spike]

Here you guys go, because I know it's driving some of you crazy. *smirks evilly*

Title: Death Does Not Become HimChapter 7

Comments

[doylebaby]

You're doing it again! I loved Orlando's explanations about every move and yes Orlando going down on Jimmy is... inspiring to say the least!

God and just when we think Sean is safe you're going to have him walk around with an axe in his skull?

Oh and what's with that burglar guy? He seems to know an awful lot about Sean.

My son bought Transformers last Saturday so I have seen Shia in action, he's cute. *g*

[slave_o_spike]

Jimmy and Orli...

Okay, enough of that. :)

Not an axe! A hammer!

The robber does seem to be in the know, doesn't he? Hmmmmm....

Shia is a cutie (I still remember him from Even Stevens). He just seems like the perfect person to be all bumbling and nerdy enough to be into the toy collecting thing.

Thank you!!!

[golden_helikaon]

That he had learned from a nineteen year old girl who used it on a over amorous and drunken Dom when he didn't have enough sense to take 'no' for an answer.

LOL!

Bugger, and there I was hoping Sean was safe until old age or something. What hectic relationship this is going to be, Orlando constantly trying to stop Sean from dying in horiffic ways.

Great chapter!

[slave_o_spike]

Yeah LOL! I always have to put a dig in about Dommie in there somewhere. (It's cuz I love him so much though!)

I know. Orli's gonna have his hands full with this one. :)

Thank you!

[liriel1810]

Holy fuck! *pants for breath* That was fucking intense, and also abso-fucking-lutely hilarious! First off, Orlando using Megatron as a weapon to force Shia to do what he wanted, then, all the fighting moves and just how he learned them! *snortgiggle*

I'm kinda with Orlando though about the hammer thing... oh bugger! He's just going to have to tell Sean what's going on, right?

[slave_o_spike]

USE A MEGATRON GO TO PRISON.

That shall be my new bumper sticker. And yep! thankfully Orli played the field before Sean to it came in handy but now that he knows the big guy, he'll be settling down.

If he can keep the big guy alive long enough. LOL!

And yes, he should come clean with Sean now, but you know how insecure he is right now...

Thank you!!!!

[pecos]

Oh, I'm reading all right! And RE-reading, because this story ROCKS! Thank you, you may now kiss the bride.

[slave_o_spike]

*points to icon*

Loves! :)

Yay! I rock...like a...thing that rocks!!!!

*smooches you*

Thank you. Glad you're enjoying. :)

[blueskydancers]

This is such a fun story - I can't wait to find out what Sean is really up to that makes him such a target!

Great writing too, your dialogue is excellent, witty and fun to read.

Hope that we don't have to wait too long for the next chapter.

[slave_o_spike]

You'll find out. LOL!

Thank you! I always find that dialogue is my strongest suit. Glad you're enjoying so much! :)

And no, the next chapter won't be too long of a wait (the one in which we have Sean's POV and the cops).