"Death Does Not Become Him" Chapter 5 Orlibean

[slave_o_spike]

So here it is.

BTW, Griffon, Joe and I saw Rambo last weekend. It was okay. Only, I think there was more blood and gore than in Peter Jackson's Braindead.

Title: Death Does Not Become HimPairing: Orlibean

Comments

[jackieville]

Wonderful chapter! Funny, hot, and I adore how you keep the characters real!!! *loves*

[slave_o_spike]

Gotta keep em real, ya know?

Of course, this is about as surreal as it gets. :)

Thank you!

[slave_o_spike]

I mean, shouldn't that usually happen to people when they turn on the music? It always seems to be on just the right station! LOL!

*kicks stupid fire*

I can tell you, it's not where Eric meets his fate. So take a deep breath in.

Okay, you know, you can let it out now. :P

And gees! Call off the weiner dog! :) Thank you!!!!

[slave_o_spike]

Writing porn is the hardest thing for me to do. Seriously. I could write almost any other situation but that one thing is a hard one. And yeah, I can't imagine wanting to read that at work. LOL!

And it doesn't look like you forgot anything! :)

Thank you! I'm glad you liked everything about it (and yes, including the Pirates nod).

[vienna80er]

What a brilliant update. It was hilarious.... at least the beginning. I loved Sean's nervousness and clumsiness. The porn.... lovely. And the end. Oh my I have such a bad feeling about Eric. And what's going to be Sean's reaction to knowing about the visions? I'm SO looking forward to more.

[slave_o_spike]

Yeah - the beginning was fun to write but the end, I had to walk that tightrope of keeping it serious and light at the same time. *winces*

Thank you!!!! More to come soon. :)

[duffy_60]

OMG, where to start? I can't pick any specific thing that I loved about this because all of it was precious and perfect. But I must say that I guffawed especially loud when the tossing of the salad came up.
As always, I'm still anxious about our intredid boys and hope that you believe in happy endings.

Stay well,
Daphne

[slave_o_spike]

I was wondering if anyone would bring that up. LOL!

I do believe in happy endings, never fear, I just like to take a few curves to get there! :)

Thank you! :))