take my love in real small doses

[slarya]

Author: Slarya
Pairing: Blohyuk
Genre/Rating: Angst/Romance, PG-13
Words: 2,688
Length: One-Shot

Summary: Silent elevator rides that bound them both together, that's the only thing in common.

Author's Note: A friend sent me this prompt since I'm suffering from writer's block lately. The moment I read it I knew I wanted to write something, so this is what

Comments

[imsweet_11]

woooo....this is beautifully written...
as beautiful as usual...
but seriously, do u really have to make them apart?*pout*
unnie, bring them back together!!! *chase u with stick*

[slarya]

ups! *runs at full speed*

sorry about breaking them apart D:
but with this prompt I didn't feel like I wanted to write a happy ending, if it helps Hyukjae returns to his old apartment months later and finds Tablo in an apron cooking a strawberry cake xD

*hugs*

[drmsr]

Ugh! this was just perfect angst and all x3 Hopefully there's a sequel for this ;_; yes?!?!

[slarya]

honestly didn't occur to me a sequel, but maybe later who knows :D

thank you for reading and your comment <3<3

[madelyn93]

oh wow. loved the prompt. loved this.

i think its really.. raw? i can't quite put a word to it but thats the first word that popped up in my mind. bittersweet and nice.
i think this would be great as one of those noregret type indie films.

[slarya]

the prompt was just perfect, seriously so many things could be written with those sentences and picture in mind.

oh, now I'm imagining tablo in one of those indie movies lol bet it would be funny to see xD

[cool_chick_9]

Why are Blohyuk's always angsty? Cant they live happily ever after??? maybe in a sequel?

So beautiful; you're an amazing writer =]

<333

[slarya]

oh thank you so much for your words, they make me very very happy *hugs*

this prompt just screamed angst thus the ending D: but maybe I'll try a happy sequel later :D

[invulgaris]

this was beautiful written, and you say writer's block? never would have guessed.

i liked the ending even if it's an angst one, it fits the prompt and the story really well.

"gentle smiles being used as an awkward language between the two" for some reason I can see this happening and it makes me smile :)

ps: so when are you posting the first chapter for limit line? I seriously wanna read that D:

[slarya]

kate <33333

writer's block is killing me lately, I have so many chaptered fics to end and I'm stuck in the middle of it :S

ah yeah limit line...1st chapter is done but I wanted to finish TS before posting any new chaptered fics :P

[invulgaris]

I want to read the last part for ts too but I dunno, limit line is just calling for me right now xD