take my love in real small doses

Sep 02, 2009 02:58

Author: Slarya
Pairing: Blohyuk
Genre/Rating: Angst/Romance, PG-13
Words: 2,688
Length: One-Shot

Summary: Silent elevator rides that bound them both together, that's the only thing in common.

Author's Note: A friend sent me this prompt since I'm suffering from writer's block lately. The moment I read it I knew I wanted to write something, so this is what ( Read more... )

blohyuk, take my love in real small doses

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stupidasxce September 2 2009, 14:06:05 UTC
Omo?!
So... sweeeet!!! =TwT=
Even if they aren't together, it's still...
Sweet!! =^^=

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slarya September 2 2009, 18:31:08 UTC
oh thanks :D that was exactly what I thought when I wrote it.

thank you for reading and your comment <33333

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kpopmania86 September 2 2009, 15:00:51 UTC
awww loved it, even if they're apart it's still beautiful
*whispers* but I so want them together T_T

*hugs*

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slarya September 2 2009, 18:33:14 UTC
*whispers back* I secretly want them together too xD

outside topic but YOUR Hyukkie looks so damn adorable
*hugs icon*

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elliebear128 September 3 2009, 23:39:13 UTC
spot!

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elliebear128 September 3 2009, 23:59:39 UTC
ohh, you want to kill me, don't you? This was so lovely, but I'm left hurting a little right now. I knew Hyuk had to leave and Tablo knew the same thing, it's just doing the right thing is really hard sometimes. Reading this was so wonderful, but now I'm left with a bit of a hollow feeling, poor Blo. I really feel for him, especially that last scene you wrote with him going to the room and smelling that strawberry scent.

Random sentences I just really loved:

the words ripping through that paper, as if trying to break free,

Some drops slip past his hoodie giving him goose bumps over his chest and stomach as they roll down his sweaty skin.

I really like the quotes you used too, they were just so appropriate and really add to the story. I also liked how you ended it with them apart, it makes it so much more real and just the right ending to them that's already always been awkward together.

<333333333333

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slarya September 4 2009, 23:12:20 UTC
When I read the prompt I just couldn't think of a happy ending for it, though I think that Blo coming back and preserving the memory of that place in his heart is kind of happy, no?
we can always imagine Hyuk coming back and finding Blo sleeping in what used to be his bedroom xD

side not: I love love love your new layout, it looks so pretty and I admit, I always drool when I see that Hae's gif <3333

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elliebear128 September 10 2009, 21:25:01 UTC
*ohh, such a belated response*

Yeah, sometimes it's just not appropriate to have a "happy ending" and I always prefer the more realistic one anyways. Then again, I do have a bit of a thing for angst^^

ah, I actually really really like the idea of Hyuk and Blo meeting up again later in life, perhaps by accident or randomly or something and they try it again :D Oh, that warms my heart just thinking about it <3

p.s. thank you! lol, i think I really showed my Hae obsession with the new layout (especially since almost all of my icons are of him too :DD Oh, I just adore him so much :DDDDD)

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hkmcdull168 September 4 2009, 07:51:53 UTC
*cries* more blohyuk angst...
but at least it ends on a "happy" note...aww tablo rented back the apartment! of course he can't let them tear it down ^^

the only thing that can make this better is...a happy blohyuk ending lolll. o well, i can dream~

and...side note. i kind of died inside when i saw tablo's blog post about his heaven...(and i swear hyukkie died a bit too hehe)

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slarya September 4 2009, 23:17:12 UTC
*hugs* don't cry, Hyuk returns the next morning to his old apartment, finds Blo sleeping on his bed and this time he doesn't let the other run away xD

oh I know, I always feel I little bit sad when I see Blo+gf pictures but I kind of think they look adorable together and I'm also happy when I see him being so happy too^^

thank you for reading and commenting <3<3

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hkmcdull168 September 5 2009, 06:33:41 UTC
OMG more blohyuk angst to come...cuz TABLO'S GETTING MARRIED OMG. *cries in corner with a forgotten eunhyuk*

...HAHA jkjk. i'm so so happy for him :D they really look adorable <3

and so now it's up to you to keep the blohyuk still alive. we blohyuk fangirls can still dream :D

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slarya September 5 2009, 11:50:38 UTC
I was a bit shocked when I read the news lol but I can't help but to imagine a mini-blo in baby clothes and omg that's going to be freaking adorable <33333

blohyuk is still ALIVE, at least for me xD

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tealsilver September 5 2009, 23:01:07 UTC
I love you. You broke my heart with this piece; I SO LOVE YOUR TRAGIC!Blohyuk~

Keep it up!! :D

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slarya September 6 2009, 01:49:31 UTC
Oh Dana, thank you so much for this lovely comment <3<3
It's kind of weird but I actually enjoy to write/read broken!blohyuk the things I do to my otp xD

your words encourage me so much, I love U too *hugs*

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