Fighting Off Hesitation (One-shot)

Jan 08, 2009 09:13



Title: Fighting Off Hesitation

Author: skytears9

Fandom: Hey! Say! JUMP

Genre: Romance, Drama, and Fluff.

Pairings: Hikato (Hikaru x Keito), hints of Chiitaro (Chinen x Ryutaro) and Yamajima (Yamada x Yuto)

Rating: PG

Word Count: 3247

Summary: Keito was always the silent type of guy who was hesitant to express his feelings. But when Hikaru starts giving ( Read more... )

hikato, okamoto keito, yaotome hikaru, fanfiction

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chibilover14 January 8 2009, 20:12:03 UTC
;___________; Aww... so sweet!! *HUGS* So well written!!! *HUGS* I absolutely loved the way you wrote it!

With Keito's feelings and all. xD How he's like thinking a bit too much and calm. Until Yuto helps him out with advice. YAY FOR OKAJIMA FRIENDSHIP! XDDD But Keito finally expressed his feelings out loud and Hikato ish back together! YAAAY! HAPPY HAPPY! *dances around* Haha a sleepover. Hope they have fun! >w< Can't wait to read more by youuu!!!

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skytears9 January 9 2009, 17:55:15 UTC
ARIGATOO~!! *DOUBLE BEAR GLOMPS*

I'm really glad you liked it and how I tried to make it more focused on Keito. XD Thanks for reading!!

Oh, yeah, I bet they'll have lots of fun at the sleepover XD

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chibilover14 January 9 2009, 20:24:54 UTC
Heehee... xD OH MY. *CAN'T BREATHE* XDDD

Haha and you succeeded! *throws confetti* xD

Pfft, why ish Hikaru always the perverted one? xD *would be amused if Keito was perverted* O.O;;;

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skytears9 January 10 2009, 23:14:48 UTC
OH, NO. *quickly lets go* BREATHE! XD

I did? YATTA! LOL.

I have no idea why Hikaru is always the perverted one. But maybe next time one of us could write it so that it's Keito who chasing after Hikaru ^^ Because I would so read that fic. ROFL.

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ring_rie January 8 2009, 20:56:24 UTC
ITS SO SWEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!!!!!
luve u!!!!!!
blushing keito is so cuuuuuuuute!!!!!!!!!

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skytears9 January 9 2009, 17:56:11 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I know, isn't Keito such a cutie?

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^^

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tokidoki_sama January 9 2009, 00:57:00 UTC
Oh My GOODNESS!!! I think that pretty much sums up my reaction to this fic... what a great way to continue my awesome day!!!

This was really well written and I could really feel the emotion you put into it. Yay for Hikato-ness! I don't know if you know this... but... it rocks my socks!!! XD I would go through and quote.. but I'd end up quoting the whole thing... XD

So in short... Thanks for writing a really awesome fic!!!

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skytears9 January 9 2009, 17:59:02 UTC
ROFL. Aww, thanks! You're so sweet! *HUGS*

Thanks!! I'm really glad you liked it! No, you rock cuz your comment really encourages me to write more! XD

Thank you for reading and leaving an awesome comment! ^^V

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eemir_eera January 9 2009, 01:02:46 UTC
Huwaaaa........i love it..i love it....yatta...yatta.....

OMG...I definitely love this.....^___^

“So, we’re taking a shower together once we get home, right?”

huwaaa...naughty hiakaru..haha..

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skytears9 January 9 2009, 18:00:02 UTC
LOL. I love your favorite quote. And yes, Hikaru is naughty. ;)

But thanks so much for reading and commenting! It makes me happy knowing that people like it! :D

BTW, I love your icon!

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eemir_eera January 9 2009, 18:04:49 UTC
arigatou..^_^

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huijin January 9 2009, 04:46:10 UTC
YAY! new story! and it's so cute! hikato is just too cute for words ^0^ although hikabu is my otp

and you put in yuto! i absolutely adore yuto and i'm glad you showed his reliable side instead of just his silly side :D

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skytears9 January 9 2009, 18:01:48 UTC
YES, NEW STORY! XD I know, right? I love Hikato for their cuteness and Keito's adorable awkwardness, but I think I lean towards Hikabu more, because I've known them longer. x]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! And I'm glad you liked how I put in Yuto's serious side!

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