Dead&Damned ficlet: The Second Floor

Jul 01, 2007 21:52

Title: The Second Floor
Author: Weslyn; Betas:
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user:weslyn, author:weslyn, oneshot, fic:dead & damned, fic, rating:nc17

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havlockvetinari July 2 2007, 05:02:01 UTC
"We weren't to fall in love
*shudder*

Holy Cow. That's just...amazing. I love how they're both handling it, and can very much see Bob demanding that out of the relationship. It's a very Hrothbert thing to do.

Love the aura thing as well, and how Harry projects strongly without realizing it.

Great piece dear!

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weslyn July 5 2007, 02:18:02 UTC
Thank you, thank you! My apologies for taking so long to reply to these comments. >_<

I figured for that stage of the story that it would be a pretty realistic take on things.

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luvmeanddespair July 2 2007, 12:06:36 UTC
Good god. I think this was up when I was on briefly last night but..oh. my god.

*dies*

A very lovely AU-ish bit. <3 I'm thinkin' I'm gonna do one for one of the longer drabble-ficlets. *eyes it warily*

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weslyn July 5 2007, 02:19:01 UTC
Uh-oh, 'nother dead fangirl ... *goes to get Bob* Hee, thanks darling!

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edana_ni_emer July 2 2007, 15:28:56 UTC
*whimper* Wow. That was incredibly hot, and it took me like six read-throughs and a full night's sleep before I could come up with anything coherent. I mean, the whole stocking-kink thing was surprisingly tasty, and I don't usually go for that, (This fandom might end up changing my mind, though.) and Harry and Bob getting into a turned-on feedback loop! Hee! Then there was smut on the kitchen floor, and I was cheering them on.

And then the last line, which broke my heart and left me bleeding on the floor beside my chair, dead. Dead, I tell you! Because for Harry, at least, it's already too late. Probably for Bob, too. Just goes to show that even wizards--or especially wizards--are still quite capable of lying to themselves.

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weslyn July 5 2007, 02:22:47 UTC
Six? Really? I'm flattered.

I was cheering them on too! *cough* And yeah, it's a bit late for our boys. They're just being stubborn. *rolls eyes*

Thank you so much for the feedback, you know how I adore it!

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miniaya July 22 2009, 21:04:10 UTC
This is incredibly HOT and well written. *fans self* and the ending!!! *falls over dead* I would love to read a "morning after" ficlit of this... XD
Thanks for posting this yummy story!

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