Distance, Part Ten

[pinkdoom]

*falls over* The last part was finished--technically--last night. I just need to step back from it for a few days and then do some tweaking. :) I'm wore out...but the plot bunnies are still alive, and they're wanting me to write more cliche!fic, so I am. I must be crazy.

Title: Distance, Part Ten
Author: pinkdoom
Summary: Sometimes it takes a

Comments

Re: Oh my

[pinkdoom]

*tips nonexistent hat* Thank you!!

Just wait...the real smut's yet to come ;)

Ahhhhhhhh.

[ksl2025]

Oh this was lovely. :-)

I snuck a peek at work....lord. I was just going to...reread the last post, but this was such a nice reward for my risky little foray. Sweet.

So delightful to see the boys actually speaknig to one another. Open, honest, forthright. Perfect. And those kisses...yummmy. Could do more and more of those. No problem.

I do appreciate that you didn't conveniently forget that in the previous part Harry hurt too much to actually get dressed on his own. So wild hot monkey sex should probably wait a bit. :-) seriously. No one gets off with that kind of pain. Don't care how much you are into whips and chains.

And I like the idea of them doing the whole teenager like make out. Take time to explore each other cause that's really the good stuff. And it usually lasts longer than the really intense stuff. :-)

Re: Ahhhhhhhh.

[pinkdoom]

No, no convenient forgetting of poor Harry's pain..you'll see in the next couple of parts that it gets him and Bob in trouble...those wandering hands and mouths start to get too aggressive, and then Harry's hurting again. Give him a while, and he'll be back in form...and definitely ready to make sure Bob knows how much he loves him *grins evilly*

And I like the idea of them doing the whole teenager like make out. Take time to explore each other cause that's really the good stuff. And it usually lasts longer than the really intense stuff. :-)As you can probably tell, I'm a fan of buildup and drawing things out enough to make it believable, but not ridiculous :) Tension only works for so long, though, and you'll see that poor, frustrated Harry will only be able to take so much more. Thankfully, he's a wizard, so he heals quicker then most people, but I tried my best to keep it as real as possible

Re: Ahhhhhhhh.

[theprimrosepath]

As you can probably tell, I'm a fan of buildup and drawing things out enough to make it believable, but not ridiculous

And this is why we love you. Or, at least why I do. :)

Re: Ahhhhhhhh.

[pinkdoom]

*GLOMPS* :) Aw, thank you so much!! I've enjoyed this story so much, and it's kind of hard to believe it's over with, as far as the writing part goes. But that's all right, I'm currently working on some cliche!fic for the comm, and right now the one I'm doing is caught in the rain. It's pure smut, but it's fun, teasing smut. And I told havlock I'd do one for her birthday, she gave me a list of propmts to choose from, so I chose Body!Switch. Won't that be fun? ;)

[weslyn]

Huzzah! In a way, it's perfect how they can't just jump each other with Harry's injuries and all. They want to, sure, but they can't. Yay for enduring sexual tension, ala "I Want You but I Can't Fuck You Right Now, BUT I Really, REALLY WANT TO".

First kisses are always my favorite to write and read. Kudos! *throws cookies*

[pinkdoom]

*accepts cookies gratefully* And ditto to the yay for enduring sexual tension...it gets them into trouble, I promise! *cackles* They find out that all that pent-up frustration just leads to more frustration, lol, and a hurting Harry. Poor boys... :) Oh, writing that first kiss was fantastic, I swear I saw it in slow motion in my head!

[moonchildetoo]

"Because I would have known that once we got home, we'd have fucked each other silly and passed out until morning. Beats the hell out of a wet motorcycle ride any day."

Bob's entire body shuddered as his eyes closed and his fingers curled into my shoulder, his other hand dropping the coffee mug on the wrought iron floor. Then his eyes snapped open and all I saw was black. An eternity of pure ebony, like staring at a starless sky on a cold night.

I just luuuurve that bit. Don't laugh - I think it's just as romantic as it is sexy!

[pinkdoom]

*is not laughing at all* ;)

I think it's both as well...I think Bob recalling Harry's words and letting them affect him like that is wonderfully sexy and romantic, because he knows now that Harry loves him just as much as he loves Harry, and that, once Harry's better, they'll get to hot and sexy and wonderful...and romantic. *hugs*

[pinkdoom]

*squishes bard back*

Thank you, sweetie! :)

though we may be sophisticated connoisseurs of the smutly, there is something wonderful about the tension and fragility of a declaration and first kiss, and you deliver on that very, very nicely.

Oh, like I told moonchilde when I finished this story a few days ago...I'm a sap. A big, bleeding-heart romantic sap when it comes to these two, and now everyone knows ;) That first kiss I wanted to be special because of all the reasons we normally think of for a first kiss being special, but especially because it is the final hurdle in healing for them. It is the one thing that they needed to do, wanted to do, and now they have...and they can move on. :) Told you...big, romantic sap. *ugh* ;)

The second is when all the (splendid) angst and misunderstandings and anxiety simply and quietly come down to It was Bob, and it was me. That's lovely, that is.Again, this goes back to the very end of the story as well...when I was working on it, I was struggling to come up with a fitting kind of "last