Distance, Part Ten

[pinkdoom]

*falls over* The last part was finished--technically--last night. I just need to step back from it for a few days and then do some tweaking. :) I'm wore out...but the plot bunnies are still alive, and they're wanting me to write more cliche!fic, so I am. I must be crazy.

Title: Distance, Part Ten
Author: pinkdoom
Summary: Sometimes it takes a

Comments

[doomthatimpends]

uhhhh yeah....you just broke my brain with _kissing_

the smex is prolly gonna leave me a drooling hulk of nothingness. I declare my undying adoration for your awesomeness

[pinkdoom]

*fixes doom's broken brain* Better, yes? :)

The actual sex is...hard to explain, because I've written my fair share of smut in this comm, but I really wanted that scene, in this story, to be special. So, when I get to posting that, hopefully you'll see it that way as well. :) *hugs*

*accepts declaration of undying adoration graciously* I cannot thank you enough, it means a lot, it really does! :)

[pinkdoom]

It shows how much you're building them as people, not just raging hormones, and the fact that they Both want to build a lasting relationship out of this, not just end up as fuck buddies.

*glees* That is EXACTLY what I was going for...you know, for all my nervousness and hesitance about this story, you all are doing a hell of a job making me feel better :) They do indeed want a lasting relationship out of this, and you know what's weird...I write this story from Harry's POV *mostly* because that's who I'm more comfortable writing, but when it came to making profound statements, it was Bob saying them, not Harry. *shrugs* Bob's better at the profound, I suppose :)

Thank you SO much, I love reading all these wonderful comments and having people tell me exactly what stuck out to them. *hugs*

Ooo...wait...platter with nekkid!Harry and nekkid!Bob...*drools* Excuse me, ladies...I have smut to write! LOL

[saintvic]

Yes, they finally managed to tell each other. I had such a bloody huge grin on my face when they said I loved you. Tender and hot at the same time.

[pinkdoom]

YAY!! I know that by this point in the story, while I was writing, I was ready to bang both their heads against the wall and have them screw each other silly, so it was a middle-ground point, I suppose LOL :) And yay for huge bloody grins...I'll readily take those as feedback!