Book!verse mini-series, 12-13

[weslyn]

Lovingly referred to as: BobWishFic
Author: Weslyn; Beta: BakeryBard - who is much adored for all her feedback. She makes this fic so much better, often helping me out with those damn sentences that just don't want to work. Much thanks to her. *luves*

BOOK VERSE
NC-17 smut!
Word Count: just over 2,000.
Pairing/Characters: Harry, Murphy, Bob.

Comments

[pinkdoom]

I pictured the absurdity of Morgan and I sitting down and discussing my theories of a Black Council over a cup of tea, but even that wasn’t enough to distract me for long.

They'd have to drink the tea with their pinkies sticking out, though *giggles* I'd pay to see that! ;)

“It’s the way you look at him. You look at him like, well… You used to look at me like that,” she said softly, and maybe it was just my primal masculine ego but I thought I might have heard what sounded like regret.

*heartbreak* Oh, Murphy! *sniffle* Poor dear.

What if he caught me…? What if he came out here to the kitchen and saw me with my hand down my pants, getting off because I was too damn aroused to sleep with him beside me? What would he do? Would he watch? Would he know that he was the cause of it?OH! Oh, yeah, Bob better be watching...serious kink for that, darling Wes...voyeur!Bob. *flails* These two pieces were tasty, dear, wonderfully tasty, and the story Murphy tells Harry was just sheer genius. And it's completely true...you can swing one

[weslyn]

And it's completely true...you can swing one way or the other, or both, but sometimes there is just that one person, no matter who they are, that makes you look at them and the situation around you differently.

Very true - and exatly what I was going for, except better put.

And voyeurism is huge!kink for me too. ^_~ Glad you liked!! *hugs*

[saintvic]

Love the backstory for Murphy here - as well as helping Harry out (at least briefly) this added an extra layer to her character. Something I love to read.

And at the end there when it seemed like they were getting closer to a resolution and then you pulled the rug out from under us again. Brilliant writing but please need them to get together. *please*

[weslyn]

Yay! I was glad someone appreciated the backstory for Murphy - Harry needed some help too, so things fell into place. Eh, Bob and Harry are a little ways off for the time being. Keep reading! I promise happy ending!

[luvmeanddespair]

Aw, Murph. But...that bit with Miranda was sweet. *pets her*

Harry. GUH, Wes. Harry, you bad boy, you. *loved every minute of it. XD*

Here's to hoping Bob calls him on it. ^_^

[weslyn]

I hate to dissapoint everyone, but, no... Bob doesn't exactly "call him on it". *hugs you* Just keep reading... Thanks for the feedback!

[bisidhegoddess]

This little series is really awesome so far. I love the feeling of tension. It's rather delicious. I wouldn't mind having some Bob dialogue, but then again, you seem to be doing just fine without any suggestions.
Anyway, I encourage you to post more as soon as it's ready.
~Miss A

[weslyn]

Thank you, thank you. Are you new? (Don't think I recognise the name).

Hm, Bob dialogue...? There'll be more in the next installments, but this part was pretty Harry-centric, I'll agree.

Yay for concrit! *dances*