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Don't Leave Me This Way

Feb 06, 2007 17:31

Title: Don’t Leave Me This Way
Author: skk670
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4,640
Characters: Veronica, Logan, Dick and Madison
Spoilers: - Up to 3.11 - Poughkeepsie, Tramps & Thieves
Summary: Veronica tries to do the mature thing
Author's Note: Much thanks to the lovey fickledame for the super-fast beta.

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misa_05 February 7 2007, 00:42:04 UTC

You are horrible for making me cry. This just hurts, Paly. This is just... ::SOBS::

I don't want to watch tonights ep now.

*runs off to cry in teh corner*...

skk670 February 7 2007, 00:45:18 UTC

Please don't cry! I left the door open - they still have the play dates with Backup and Diaka. And seeing each other should bring Veronica and Logan closer togheter. Plus, now Logan has a source of unconditional love. Maybe that will be enough to make him think before he acts.

Thank you for posting feedback! XXOOXX

sweetumms33 February 7 2007, 04:25:11 UTC

I wasn't going to read this, I'm too scared of lovey-dovey Veronica's a saint fic, but this was perfect. No one was right, no one was totally wrong, everyone was just screwed by all the stupid little things each of them does. Great job, you're writing is always phenomenol

skk670 February 11 2007, 20:24:26 UTC

I think, in this situation, that Veronica's reaction in the series was too extreme. As you said, there was more than enough mistakes to go around. I wish they had taken a more mature stance on the show. *sigh* oh, well.

Thank you for posting feedback.

afrocurl February 7 2007, 04:45:08 UTC

Paly--I'm so with Misa on this one. You made me sort of cry, but then again I have "Breathe Me" playing right now, which doesn't help a damn bit.

I was trying to figure out if this was going to make tonight easier on me now or not (oh wait--I've still got 20 minutes to go and I don't think this is doing it.)

All of that aside, this was painful in the best way possible. I mean, the situation that these four found themselves in is truly fucked up, and you got at that so well.

I feel like stabbing my iTunes as now "Never Alone Again" (that song from the end of 304) is playing.

Thanks for this P!

skk670 February 11 2007, 20:26:56 UTC

I was sniffing a bit myself. I wanted the situation to end in a mature manner. I agreed that it would take Veronica a long time to overcome this, if she even could. So I thought why not give them a mature breakup? One that shows that there is still love and kindness on both parts?

Too bad it didn't work out this way on the show. Thank you for leaving feedback.

xbirdseyeviewx February 7 2007, 04:47:17 UTC

*cries hysterically.*

skk670 February 11 2007, 20:27:56 UTC

I'm so sorry. This story was written to make me feel better about the Logan/Madison situation. I didn't mean to upset you.

But thank you for reading and posting feedback.

wily_one24 February 7 2007, 04:49:22 UTC

You are NOT allowed to make me cry.

I think... I think the dog was what did it. Her explanation of the dog.

I don't need this now. I'm a little puddle of emotional goo and you are NOT HELPING. If I cry during the episode later, then I will not be happy. Do you hear me? NOT HAPPY.

skk670 February 11 2007, 20:29:31 UTC

Did you cry during the episode? I had hoped, but didn't expect, that Logan and Veronica would have a mature breakup. I wanted Veronica to act like an adult, to mirror Logan's mature breakup, so that they could both have good memories to look back on.

It didn't work on the show, did it?