Soooo... I need your opinion

[skellig8]

I was rooting through some notebooks and I came upon this. I quickly typed it up and I'm putting it up for your perusal. Hopefully I should get some feedback. Please?

Title: ?
Rating: PG-13/R, ?
Genre: Drama/Romance/Angst
Warnings: slash, medical stuffs
Pairing: Kirk/Spock pre-slash?
Summary: " 'I'm fine," Kirk soothed. 'If anything was wrong Bones would

Comments

[jouissant]

What were your poll questions going to be?

I'm intrigued! I definitely want to know more, and the "mind meld gave me feeeelings" is one of my favorite tropes in the fandom. I also really like the complicating factor of Jim getting angry with Spock for melding with him- often Kirk's first meld with nu!Spock is presented as so easy and perfect, but it makes sense that the meld with Spock Prime would be a traumatic experience, and one that Jim might not jump at the chance to repeat.

I think the plot and content are strong and compelling- I also think some polishing in terms of sentence structure/agreement and flow would really help the story shine, so let me know if you want a second pair of eyes for that. I'm a grammar nerd and an SAT tutor, so I find it satisfying.

So to sum up: I want to read more! :)

[erinlouise08]

I like it. I hope you decide to continue!

[snakelights]

Lovely!

Why are there not more comments here?

[skellig8]

Thanks for the comment :D

I don't know exactly where this is going, actually. I guess there aren't more comments because I don't really post on the main sites until the work is actually completed. :D

It saves people from being like, oh no WIP!

[jayjay133]

I think this is a really good start. You should totally continue with it!