The Art of Falling - Chapter 1

[siriusmoonpup]

Title: The Art of Falling
Author: Siriusmoonpup
Pairing: Yunjae/Yoosu
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Jaejoong is off to right the wrongs of the world - the fact that he doesn't have a boyfriend - and whether he likes it or not, Yoochun is going to help.

Enjoy =] Comments are loved <3

Comments

[seimeinohana]

-spot- ?

[siriusmoonpup]

I spy spot! X'D

[seimeinohana]

Haha, I actually finished reading it already but a bit incoherant at the moment to compose a proper reply to your fic since it's past midnight for me already.

=)

[ting5]

oooh nice to see JaeChun friendship...heheh Su already set his cap on Yoochun same goes for Jae on Yunho...cant wait to see hoiw things go ^^ update soon

[siriusmoonpup]

haha i love jaechun friendship <3 they always reminded me of two best friends XD

oh yes yes ::nods:: Jae totally has the hots for Yunho and same with Su for Chun. Too bad Chun is straight hehe~

thank you for reading bb <33

[sidmaron]

“Because he’s cute and probably is gayer than the rainbow, and could probably make a better conversation about hot men and their sweat.”
ROFL I loved their conversation.
Chunnie! Just you wait for Susu to make you gay! Hehe~

Update soon. :3

[siriusmoonpup]

XDDD i love that quote too =] glad you liked it hun <3
And Jaechun are a bundle of amazing when they're together haha
Glad you liked it bb and thank you for reading <333

[byuldeureul]

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Omg, I wasn't sure what to expect when I read the summary of this fic, but this is absolutely precious. [Flails at you] Your writing, your humor -- everything about this first chapter makes me so excited to read the next! *^____^* Uwaaaaaah~~~~~..........

Your Jaejoong is so very flighty and whimsical. With disgruntled Yoochun, he's even more precious. >3< Junsu was so very sweet and awkward, so I can't wait to see him work up the courage to ask Yoochun his name! ^^ And, of COURSE, I can't wait to read Yunho's appearance and how he'll interact with Jaejoong; but for now, I'm just generally amused by the misadventures in conversation by our favorite Soulmate pair. [Cackles] For the record, that "Jae asking Chun about why guys don't have menstral periods in 8th grade" thing made me ROFL at my computer, SERIOUSLY. XDDD That one liner alone was *priceless

[siriusmoonpup]

Aah~ Long comment FTW <33333 i love long comments =] ::bounces:: they make me feel...uhh appreciated XDDD (i couldn't think of another word to describe how i felt hahaha).

I'm glad that first chapter made you excited to read the second one =] i was a bit worried that people wouldn't like seeing ONLY jaechun (with a dash of su) instead of outright Yunjae/Yoosu lolz.

Mmm i love 4D Jaejoong, he amuses me to no ends and i always thought of chun as the grounding point in their relationship haha i just write them as how i view them =3 they're just darlings afterall haha.

LOL Jae has some weird questions doesn't he? Well that's why we love him so much lololz.

And about watching me, no worries at all bb~! Watch awayyy <333 i dont mind at all and i'll add you back so dont worry. Hope you enjoy my writings =]

And Thank you for the comment bb <3333

[ko_bands]

AH! This makes me laugh so hard! Susu is the cutest and Jae is the most proudly gay guy ever!

[siriusmoonpup]

hahaha im glad that it made you laugh XDD

and yes yes Jae is the proudest gay man ever LOL i think Chun sometimes just likes to watch him go on one of his rampages hahaha

Thank you for the comment bb <333