The Art of Falling - Chapter 1

Oct 09, 2009 08:53

Title: The Art of Falling
Author: Siriusmoonpup
Pairing: Yunjae/Yoosu
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Jaejoong is off to right the wrongs of the world - the fact that he doesn't have a boyfriend - and whether he likes it or not, Yoochun is going to help.

Enjoy =] Comments are loved <3

Chapter 1 )

fanfiction: chaptered, writing: the art of falling, couple: yoosu, couple: changmin/?, couple: yunjae

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byuldeureul October 9 2009, 17:34:05 UTC

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Omg, I wasn't sure what to expect when I read the summary of this fic, but this is absolutely precious. [Flails at you] Your writing, your humor -- everything about this first chapter makes me so excited to read the next! *^____^* Uwaaaaaah~~~~~..........

Your Jaejoong is so very flighty and whimsical. With disgruntled Yoochun, he's even more precious. >3< Junsu was so very sweet and awkward, so I can't wait to see him work up the courage to ask Yoochun his name! ^^ And, of COURSE, I can't wait to read Yunho's appearance and how he'll interact with Jaejoong; but for now, I'm just generally amused by the misadventures in conversation by our favorite Soulmate pair. [Cackles] For the record, that "Jae asking Chun about why guys don't have menstral periods in 8th grade" thing made me ROFL at my computer, SERIOUSLY. XDDD That one liner alone was *priceless*.)

Like I said, this was a wonderful little read and I can't WAIT for the next installment!! [Bounces around] Oh, and........I hope you won't mind terribly if I watch you for future updates? *w*;; B-Because just from this alone, I can tell I'll definitely enjoy your other works; your style makes me smile in a way I can't even begin to describe.......so light and quick-paced and realistic, yet a touch of warm fantasy, too......... [Sparkles]

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siriusmoonpup October 10 2009, 16:48:07 UTC
Aah~ Long comment FTW <33333 i love long comments =] ::bounces:: they make me feel...uhh appreciated XDDD (i couldn't think of another word to describe how i felt hahaha).

I'm glad that first chapter made you excited to read the second one =] i was a bit worried that people wouldn't like seeing ONLY jaechun (with a dash of su) instead of outright Yunjae/Yoosu lolz.

Mmm i love 4D Jaejoong, he amuses me to no ends and i always thought of chun as the grounding point in their relationship haha i just write them as how i view them =3 they're just darlings afterall haha.

LOL Jae has some weird questions doesn't he? Well that's why we love him so much lololz.

And about watching me, no worries at all bb~! Watch awayyy <333 i dont mind at all and i'll add you back so dont worry. Hope you enjoy my writings =]

And Thank you for the comment bb <3333

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