Pygmalion: Chapter 2/2

[siodo_il_vero]

PYGMALION

Pairing: Minho & Taemin

Rating: R-17

Genre: Drama/Romance

Comments

[artificiallilac]

Legit sobbing right now omg this was perfect. Everything about it was just brilliant.

I really, really love the way you write, I can't say it enough, I swear.

Minho's character is so deliciously profound and Taemin is just the cutest little fucker I can't even. I loved this.

There's something so beautiful about it, I don't know how to describe it in words but ugh.
adjgakfgjkajglks;d never stop writing please!

Thank you so much for sharing! <3 :)

[siodo_il_vero]

thank you so much!!! <333

[ext_1233571]

Yo

[siodo_il_vero]

wow super late response :/
but o.o;; you basically found every one of my weak points omfg but thanks <333333

[starsplum]

It is beautiful, just like a painting~ If this was a painting though, it would not be one with bold strokes of bright colours, but instead it is a blend of pastel colours that probably won't form into an object, but gives off an overall feeling instead. When reading this, I feel like I can almost feel the calm that Taemin was talking about by being with Minho.

And that part with reality and age and destroying innocence and everything lovely is so true. I am a musician, so inspiration, feelings, imagination and all those are so very important. I have improved my techniques over the years, but if I were to pick, I would choose the way I used to play when I was younger. Withoug being caged by thoughts of precision, perfection, rules, and pleasing others. Too bad you need all those in reality.

[siodo_il_vero]

oh thank you so much ;_______; especially for the painting metaphor it was what i was trying to go for but i didn't know if it really worked out or not :/

[sohnyong]

ok heres ur review

[siodo_il_vero]

omfg you're criticizing /my/ grammar?? LOOK AT YOUR REVIEW. LOOK AT YOUR CHOICES.
jkjk ily and thanks for putting up with me and my weirdass writing process
<333333