Technoromanticism - Chapter 7

[sinnatious]

Title: Technoromanticism

Author: Sinnatious

Summary: TezRyo Robot AU.

Rating: Definitely Mature.  For the usual culprits.

Author’s Note: I have a feeling my pacing might be terribly off for these last couple of chapters.  Will be trying to fix before I post, but not sure how it will go.

Comments

[kaorismash]

I have a feeling my pacing might be terribly off for these last couple of chapters.

I FOUND IT FINE? But I uh, probably would have no real clue on this, since I read these all rather disjointedly. ._.;;

The tiles were refreshingly cool underneath his feet.
Aaah I love this feeling. *_*

instead of being bothered by a bioroid so advanced that it left him feeling obsolete.
AWWWWW. THIS PART IS JUST, SO SAD AND AWESOME AT THE SAME TIME. Besides the obvious, it's like, he knows he's missing something, and he doesn't quite know how to get it. :((

I only ever remember the customers.
askjfhagsadg I COMPLETELY MISSED THIS OMFG. DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD;

And, okay, I was gonna keep doing the quoting thing, etc. Except I did that enough the first time I think?

I just. This part makes me so sad yet soso happy. The domestic scene especially, and Tezuka eating pizza with utensils. KJDHGKSFG MORE PEOPLE NEED TO DO THIS YYYY. sjhgs Gaah. That whole interaction with table manners, and how Ryoma doesn't even listen to him, with the

[sinnatious]

But your bipolarity is so much fun! :3

Will probably not change much anyway, because I'm loathe to rewrite too much.

Tiles -> I KNOW, RIGHT? *__* I want to go find some nice cool tiles to walk on right now.

You're actually advocating eating pizza with utensils?!!

As for everything else.... ;____;

[kaorismash]

/:) /:) /:)

IT DOES NOT NEED REWRITING. OR AT LEAST, NOT MUCH IF IT IS BOTHER YOU. :| Because, seriously, the pacing just speeds up and then asdkjfhgkdsdg

MY TILES ARE COLD, THANKFULLY. *_* Yaaay room. :33

WELL, YEAH? I REALLY HATE GETTING GREASY FINGERS. :| Chips too, but I am less fussy with them. :D;;

:-< Oh them. ;;

[agentlerain]

*____________* I AGREE WITH KAORI-CHAN. THE DOMESTICITY COVERS THE ANGST THAT TEZUKA HAS. D: D: Relic of the past. ;____;

“It would mean that I wouldn’t get to keep you.” LOVE CONFESSION. >:D

And asaksda;lsk;as, over Ryoma caring about others like him. :3 :3

I love that certain food types were made for hands. Like chips. Pizza. Jelly beans. *___*

[sinnatious]

All the best foods, really.

Did you know that sushi is actually considered finger food? :O (Won't stop me using chopsticks, though).

There's a thought - how would you eat pizza with chopsticks?

[firedraygon97]

So many opposite emotions in this chapter! Ryoma learning about the others left behind (who are they, who are they~?), Tezuka enjoying Ryoma's company, the LOVE CONFESSION AT THE END *flails*. Very, very awesome. Tezuka's such an emo dork. ♥

Also, the note about Tezuka not liking sports? D: Where did his tennis skillz go?!

Looking forward to Sunday's update!!

[sinnatious]

Well, they'd almost all be female, so... not exactly brimming with examples from canon. :P

His tennis skillz were all channelled into robotics. :|

[roseofthine]

Possessive already, buchou? 8D <333333

[karorumetallium]

D'AWWWWW, again. I'm feeling so sorry foe Tezuka, for both of them. Oh, JEEZ.